Now I might be a tad bit late to this story, but hell this is good. Though I have to admit that I equally love and hate your grade of detail when describing everything. I love how it gives you a clear view. Be it the landscape, her thoughts or feelings. You unfold them so thoroughly that it really brings out the most of it. I can imagine the scenery just right and feel her paranoia with the amount of thoughts that flush her head in what must be seconds. But that same thoroughness annoys me at times, when she’s thinking and thinking and thinking, and I just want to know how the story will continue. I found myself skipping a few graphs only to go back because I didn’t want to miss anything.
And your way of writing sometimes makes me feel like an illiterate dork, you are very skilled at handling words. I do hope you will continue this work, because for 1. You left a real mean cliffhanger here and 2. how is this going to end? Will they meet again and go their separate ways after settling everything? Will she follow him back? So many questions!
Even if you won’t finish this, thank you for this awesome work!

i really like your writing & i’m enjoying this story

Thank you so much for deciding to continue this story after your apparent hiatus. I’ve only found this story today and I’m absolutely enthralled. I love the way you portray Isabel and the struggle with her mental health, as I feel it is a very realistic representation of what it feels like to battle your own psyche, abt least from my point of view. I also love the idea of this story taking place after her return from Rook Island, rather than making the entire story take place on the island. It makes your story unique and makes it stand out from other similar Far Cry Fanfics. I apologize if this review is long winded, but I just feel like this story deserved something well thought out for the effort you put into it. I hope my review might inspire you to continue writing this story, and in any case, I look forward to the next chapter.

I love this story and your style of writing itCan‘t wait for the next chapter. I especially love his fucked up mindgames and that Izzy tries so hard to not give in...but I really hope she will

I love your story :) this chapter was perfect. I really enjoyed the flash back and the way you write makes it feel so real. Great job! Waiting egerly for the next update.

Another brilliant chapter! It was very intense and extremely well written. I'm just gunna throw this out there but CALL HIM! Lol that's what I would do ;)

That was awesome! Well worth the wait and I know the next chapter will be worth the wait too

The poor girl is having a really tough time. You give such great insight into her mind and how twisted reality and imagination are becoming for her. Keep up the great work! Looking forward to you next update :)

Getting those excited tingling feelings! So happy you are almost ready to update :)

Oh! So excited! I'm super happy you are going to be back at it but I'm also sure that all your fans are very understanding, don't push yourself too hard. Family and health come first!

Aww, even sadder sad face but I've been with this story since you started and will still be waiting for your updates even if it takes years again :) this story is too interesting to miss out on.

This is so awesome!
Please keep on writing
That Story is fucking Great!
Greetings from Germany

Oh, sad face. But glad you arn't leaving for years lol

I read this story way back when and was sad when it went on hiatus! I just by chance came across it recently and I'm glad I did and that you're back writing it! Pls keep updating!

"Noodles" lol but seriously this story is amazing, I really really enjoy the suspence/angst. You also have a way with words, it's pretty magical the way you discribe everything. Keep uploading because it's the best story I've seen in this particular fandom!