Reviews for Obsession
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 5 . 1/14/2019
Loved It!
FelineNinjaGrace chapter 5 . 1/11/2019
Ok, so this fanfic hasn't been updated in 3 years. I will finish the story for ya'll:
She ends up rejecting him, and somehow dies (whether it's him who kills her or some other freak accident).
Later on, the scene where he kills his mother happens.
She is then reincarnated on earth alongside his mother, who is Jupiter.
They are both friends in the cleaning toilets business. Sadly, her parents are dead.
She loves mechanics, but never has time to do it. Kind of how Jupter loves stars and never has time to study them like her father.
Somehow Belem sees her with Jupiter and has realized it's too good to be true.
He bargains earth for her hand in marriage.
She again refuses him, not remembering any of their thousands of years together and generally being scared s***less of his "harvest earth" tendencies, and she wants no part of that.
The whole scene on Jupiter happens, with him threatening both Jupiter's parents if she doesn't sign over earth to him, and threatening Artemis if she doesn't marry him. It ends up like how the movie ends. Except Artemis is reunited with her "family" that she doesn't remember, lol. And goes off into the universe with them ;)
belladu57 chapter 5 . 9/21/2018
Very good
Bad Ass Female Fighter chapter 5 . 5/16/2018
Real smooth there Balem...and very hot. Whatever's keeping you from updating, I hope you'll come back from it. I accidentally watched the movie and ended up liking it; I accidentally found this story and it is so f***ing better than the movie. I hope you'll create a reincarnation who is Jupiter's best friend and have her tag along for the ride...literally. Seriously, don't leave me hanging, I LOVE this story.
InsaneCat chapter 5 . 4/12/2017
updateupdateupdatepleasepleaseplease
reindeergames19 chapter 1 . 3/22/2017
Please update! 2 years later and I'm still dying!
Guest123 chapter 1 . 3/17/2017
Please update!
Kalyra-Anne chapter 4 . 3/2/2017
Please update, I'm utterly in love with this story. It's written so well, can't wait to see what happens when everything unfolds. To leave it with such a cliffhanger is like a crime Hah. I'm on the edge of my seat! Would be so unfortunate if it was left where it is as it is such an amazing story! I'm sure that I'm not the only one holding out for the rest of the ride... But I also understand that life totally gets in the way. Thank you for what you've written so far. Truly a great fic!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/2/2017
update please?
seungska chapter 5 . 12/20/2016
omg would there be a final chapter? love it so damn much , followed since last year
Guest chapter 5 . 11/29/2016
God i like this story :3 are you planning the next part soon ?
Guest chapter 5 . 11/20/2016
Update please!
Guest chapter 5 . 7/3/2016
PLEASE UPDATE I'M LOSSING MY MIND
Kalyra-Anne chapter 3 . 3/28/2016
Please update! It's been over a year since your last update and I really want to know what happens. Pretty please! I love story!
Kalyra-Anne chapter 2 . 1/24/2016
Please update! This is too amazing for it to not be finished. You've written everything so beautifully and Balem is spot on. I really want to know what happens .
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