Loved it, but wish it was longer or had a sequel

Holy Fuck that's hot.

I know it's been years, and you' re busy with other projects, but a sequal to this sure could be fun

I need to give you a digital high 5! \.
That was one of the most well written and detailed BDSM stories I've read in a loooong while.
Now I leave you with my favorite line...
"Want to come and then just die in peace."
XD hahahahaha

Aww, that was sweet. :D

Beautiful. Such a beautiful story.

Fuck. Fuciktyfuckfuckfuck! Awesome. Loved it. :)

Awesome!

Ta

Loved it. Perfect ending.

Awesome ending, perfectly in style for those particular people and completely hot. Thanks for sharing

I've been enjoying this story from the beginning and am now really curious about their case and how their relationship develops. Obviously you don't have to take my suggestion, but I think it would be awesome if you wrote a sequel that showed the progression of their relationship from just sex to friends to maybe something more. I'd love to read that and I've really enjoyed reading this.

I love it !

I really like this story. That was utterly adorable and completely in character :)

This was brilliant, andSO. DAMN. HOT...

aw, I was hoping you'd go on here with that assignment.
anyway, lovely story, though i don't quite understand what major sholto can do/is saying here.
cheers
maya