DAMN IT! Darn I really would have loved to see wgat was inside dat envolope! NOOOOOOOOO

Jonathan Irons rise to power plan domination world witches ATLAS Cooperation invasion Romagna, Karlsland, and Fuso: Atlas Victory Battle of the Gallia (Witches-ATLAS War) : Atlas Victory Battle of the Dunkrik: Altas Victory Battle of the Britannia (Witches & Sentinel and United Nation has join against battle Atlas) : Witches & Sentinel Victory Atlas invasion the Orussia Orussia & Russian has alliances and Suomus join battle Against Atlas In North Africa continue

Did you watch House of Cards? Especially House of Cards season 4 trailer? I wish Jonathan Iron being more charming and evil.

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If you are familiar with Samurai Jack, then could you do the Samurai Jack/Strike Witches story. It is however, more based on Demongo: The Master of Grimm by Villain84. It is what happens when Demongo is ressurected onto Strike Witches' universe, and then he set out do absorb all the Neurois and the souls of witches, forming his personal army to rule the Earth. Not even the 501st JFW can stop this menace. The eye color of the witches, who are captured by Demongo, will be red.

The story is called Demongo: The Master of Neuroi. It will not be an M-rated story, but a T-rating story.

Go read Demongo: The Master of Grimm to find out more.

After all this I still ask: With all due respect, where the Heck is Sentinel and what in the worlds are these supposed anti-theses of Atlas even doing at this point?

To be truthful, I wanted to give this story a chance. I really did. But I just can't bring myself to read another word. First off, how does Irons already now about the Strike Witches universe and how to get there? It was kind of thrown out there to just give a reason to put the Advanced Warfare characters and technology into the Strike Witches world. It seems to be a big plot hole.

There is a lot of combat and violence in these first chapters, and I'm fine with that. But there is just no substance behind it. The AW universe invades the SW universe and just starts killing and destroying anyone and anything without any rhyme nor reason. Also, the way the 504th was killed off seems very reminiscent to Attack on Titan. They were only there to be annihilated with no background or characterization to give the reader any sympathy. Just a distasteful use of shock value to me.

Another thing is that the way the AW soldiers are portrayed is absolutely revolting. As mentioned above, they just kill everyone without reason. And they enjoy it too. Sure, I understand if the goal was to make the reader non-sympathetic towards them, but there are other ways than portraying them as psychopathic sadists. I'm surprised there was no mention of sexual assault in this massacre of a battle. If there was, this would be the Strike Witches universe's version of the Rape of Nanking.

If such acts will occur, then I fear for the witches and Maria.

This is as far as I will go.

Now I was wondering...

...what happen to the Neuroi? So far, there are no Neuroi attacks. Quite strange.

Arty pah! The allies will bring Battleships. Montana class, Yamato class, and H-44 class. Moment that arty opens up. They will have problems in the form of 16in, 18.1in, and 20in guns. Should I also mention that the Orrussians will be bringing the first versions of the MIG-15. Even though the beach will be undefended have the allies knock on the door anyway with a heavy bombardment. Also when those Bombers come they will run into a wall of Flak. Chance for Atlas to get a ugly shock.

I think we need to see some good old creatively. Driving a Goliath rolling bomb under a hover tank then blowing it up.

don't you have COD Heroes to save Strike Witches world? do you really need them to be suffer?

where are the Sentinels by the way? they maybe the super powerful Witches but they really need their help NOW! Sentinels, Ghosts, US Marines, S.A.S. Anyone! NOW! NOW DAMNIT! NOW!

I think I know where this story is going. Welcome to PMC ladies.

This story... is getting darker and darker. I'm not sure I'm gonna enjoy reading this, due the change in tone.