Very well written :)

Oh my gosh! I loved this story,it was hilarious! I'm kinda disappointed that they didn't actually get married though.u did an amazing job,the beginning was really funny

Love it :D

Ohhhh that stubborn, narcissistic, sun of a gun! He still won't admit he likes her! What's a girl to do? Not only do we NOT believe it was a cover-up, we have the evidence to prove it: THERE WAS NO TONGUE WITH MARTHA! Oh god, oh god, ok. Billion dollar idea alert: whouffaldi T-shirts with Twelve kissing Clara (we'll use the screen cap from Missy and cut her out) and the tagline "There was no tongue with Martha"! If he won't admit it himself, we'll make him admit it! Or possibly send him a fish wrapped in a newspaper in the mail :P
This was hilarious, I laughed so hard!

Great story and I loved reading it

Great story!your writting os sooo good...can't wait for the Next chapter!congratulations...greetings from brasil...;D

Really well written story. Funny and not cheesy. :)