This had an interesting start but I uh guess this wasn't continued ah well.

WHO THE FUCK MURDER TUNA. I WILL NOT ACCEPT THIS TO END UNTIL I FIND WHO THE SHIT HAT THAT TOOK TUNA AWAY FROM SPRING ONION. HOW DARE THEY. I WILL NOT REST UNTIL YOU UPDATE THIS

You made me cry.
The way you put Miku's depression hit me so hard. It was supposed to be their anniversary but BAM! some deranged lunatic murdered Luka! WHY. For plot. And I give it two thumbs up. WAAAAAAAAAAAY UP FO SHO.
BUT I'm still kinda sad that Luka's dead and all even if Miku can see her.
You need to continue this. Luka's death must be put to justice.

Haha, I love the start to this. I would probably continue reading it as long as it doesn't turn into something that is absolutely unbelievable given the basis of the current plot. As for a prequel, that would be so awesome! I love me some Negitoro! Maybe you could also write something on the actual time Luka got murdered? Like, maybe a story where Miku was all happy and then she finds Luka brutally murdered or something? I know you gave a description already, but it would be nice to have it all with a plot and stuff. Anyways, love this so far :D

This was interesting, really. A bit supernatural cause Luka's here as a ghost and all...but it's charming anyway
Luka and Miku, even togheter after dead (well for one of the two lol)

I'd like to read a prequel yeah, but not the murder. So the slice of life is much appreciated but not when she pass away ;-; please.

And we need a next chapter for the murder! xD I mean the murder need to pay! _ !

Great job, thanks for your work and have a good day ;)

Greetings,
Well this is surely very interesting to read between the huge amount of Negitoro fluffs, so it would be nice if you keep writing this fic and yes, i think you should mention their life before the murder happened. I would say you have done a good job by the way. Hope to see new chapters soon
Shirogami Clockworker

This is extremely intriguing, mostly because of what remains unsaid. What were those words? What exactly was Luka's plan?

Another thing that intrigues is that I could not really tell where in the narrative Miku began to believe Luka, or indeed whether she did at all. For all I can tell, she may simply be playing along with what she believes to be her own madness, jumping feet-first into that abyss.

The only criticism I could offer is that Luka's explanation of why she moves as she does comes across as weirdly science-fiction in an otherwise supernatural setting. Not a deal-breaker, certainly, but I was uncomfortably reminded of The Force being reduced to a glorified blood infection. Maybe Luka is trying to explain it to herself as much as Miku, trying desperately to remain rational in the wake of her own death.

Speaking of which, the imagery about Luka's eyes in life and in death was haunting. I wonder what Miku sees in the eyes of this ghost?