I look forward to the day u finish this! She def. needs some sexy night wear. Loved that he couldn’t stop staring!

I keep coming back to this story! I love getting to reread it! You have done an amazing job!

I truly hope you do finish this story. I am willing hang in. I really love the direction it's going in.

Wow i can't believe it has been over 2 years since this story updated. I do hope you will come back to it one day.

soooooo are you updating this story? I found it the other day and couldn't stop reading. that I think your number one reason to update. you'reso good with words that your story flows naturally, there's not even a paragraph I didn't read. the storyline itself is simple but that just another prove you are good. i mean not many writers can write a pregnancy journey, with only 1 lemon at the beginning, interesting. and sometimes they're some spelling errors and I dont mindI like how everything revolves around bella and edward and when you inserts side storyline like Alice's, it doesn't take away the main one. I like the minimum angts, sometimes I want bella to get back on Edward, to hurt him the way he hurt her but your way is fine too.

I think what readers still wait until now is whether they'll end up together or not. and for that you just have to update

Please continue! I love this story!

Great story!
Buf funny that on the end note you say you wouldn’t abandon the story, and it has been almost two years :-)
Would’ love to see it finished!

This is a great story! I really hope that you are able to add to it soon.

Update soon please! Love this story

Can I ask about how you would finish this?

I love this story!

So I loved this story, but after rereading it, I have some concerns about how it all started. Now that I am older and have a career working with those that experienced sexual assault and have been intensively trained on the matter, I can tell you having sex with someone that cannot consent is rape. Point. Blank. Period.
If the roles were reversed would you think this was ok and that this is a romantic story? A socially awkward female virgin comes into a bathroom drunk. She is already uncomfortable with those of the opposite sex and is shocked when she sees a naked man before her. Yes she flirts and yes she kisses him, but he touches her before she can give consent for more. Then she is in the moment but once again she hesitates and instead of asking if it is ok, he slams into her.
So not only was there no consent on the final act of sex but even if there was, it would still be rape. No one that is intoxicated is in their right mind to give consent. Bella, who was sober, even knew he wasn't in his right mind, but did it anyway. AND she even said that she didn't think he would have sex with her sober. That is rape.
I think this first chapter needs to be rewritten because it now taints the entire story. Maybe she was tipsy so had liquid courage? What if they somehow accidentally both get in the shower together, she accidentally falls on top of him, and trying to be brave makes the first move. He is an active participant and verbally states it. After they have sex he starts to puke and she realizes how drunk he is and is embarrassed because now she thinks he only had sex with her because he was drunk. If they had both been drinking and she didn't realize how drunk he was (not seeing him even drinking that much) then it would be an entirely different situation. But as is, she raped him.

So I loved this story, but after rereading the first chapter, I have some concerns about how it all started. Now that I am older and have a career working with those that experienced sexual assault and have been intensively trained on the matter, I can tell you having sex with someone that cannot consent is rape. Point. Blank. Period.
If the roles were reversed would you think this was ok and that this is a romantic story? A socially awkward female virgin comes into a bathroom drunk. She is already uncomfortable with those of the opposite sex and is shocked when she sees a naked man before her. Yes she flirts and yes she kisses him, but he touches her before she can give consent for more. Then she is in the moment but once again she hesitates and instead of asking if it is ok, he slams into her.
So not only was there no consent on the final act of sex but even if there was, it would still be rape. No one that is intoxicated is in their right mind to give consent. Bella, who was sober, even knew he wasn't in his right mind, but did it anyway. AND she even said that she didn't think he would have sex with her sober. That is rape.
I think this first chapter needs to be rewritten because it now taints the entire story. Maybe she was tipsy so had liquid courage? What if they somehow accidentally both get in the shower together, she accidentally falls on top of him, and trying to be brave makes the first move. He is an active participant and verbally states it. After they have sex he starts to puke and she realizes how drunk he is and is embarrassed because now she thinks he only had sex with her because he was drunk. If they had both been drinking and she didn't realize how drunk he was (not seeing him even drinking that much) then it would be an entirely different situation. But as is, she raped him.

I love this story so much! I really wish you would finish it! Maybe even turn it into a book!

I remember reading this a couple years ago and having no clue what funnel cake is. I saw a video today on how to make it and it reminded me of this story. Reread the whole story and love it just as much as I did the first (few) times! hoping for it to update soon!