I look forward to an update of the Magey fic. She's my second favorite Maker, barely beating Cave.

I am very confused.

please add OC in the character tag, thanks

Well, that was a thing.

The day Vert finally notices Chika is the day Vert gets a little sister
Oh wait... XD

Ok, interesting turn of events this time around. Lan's in a relationship(I guess that happened offscreen), some funny events here and there(especially in that bookstore lol). Wonder who the clinger is?

Interesting, like the OCs so far. Zed's pretty funny.

Wonder what Lan is forgetting.

Not a bad remake, liking it so far. Hope it stays in lowee a bit longer this time..

So, he's actually happy with the name lan and now he might be getting into harem antics. Ha, elfen lied and akame ga kiru reference there.

Lol I love the jokes

Thanks for the new chap, slider. And Lan hikari, lol she couldn't think of anything better, huh(wonder if he'll like it or know the reference)?

Lol fun

Oh, I remember following after reading your first chapter a while ago but it's been some time now, so I forget what the original was even about but this start isn't bad, hope to see more.

Nice start. I didnt get to see what the original was like but I like this "re;vised" one, lol. Looking forward to your next chapter(hope it doesn't take a few month though). Followed and FAV'd.

xD pretty good i was thinking of writing one but trying to add a WW2 Time period along with a random gamer from modern times leaked in as well but then! of course i would have to write racist things as the Wehrmacht/Nazi's and axis powers together were and i would get hate for no good reason im not trying to glorify them dumbasses.