Women dont have a prostate

Uh, females don't have prostates.

Agreed girls don't have a prostate XD this is a crazy FanFiction

Can't believe I'm doing this either. By any chance, was the fanfic that inspired you, "Guise At Me Differently" by heathcliff65? Yes, I know the writer. He actually said that if his story was the one mentioned in the summary, it would be such an honor. Actually, he wrote GAMD only 4 years ago so it can be said that he had poor writing skills at the time. But considering he wrote it at a young age, some people still can't see past the fact that an adolescent can write a story with few, if not none, grammatical errors. Heathcliff was bombed 9(and still is but with fewer number) with mean private messages expressing hate towards GAMD. If any of you were responsible, please, stop. Thank you. #Heatchcliff'sFriend

Girls don't have prostate.

Ugggghhhhh I can't believe I'm doing this...

Ok let me start off with while this... situation... is NOT my cup of tea... I will say that since I SADLY know the author I feel obligated to give a real-ish review.

The original ff that Londrez and I came across was POORLY written. While this is a unique idea it lacked a certain eloquence in it's original format. So Londrez took it upon himself to "fix" this mess. And once again while this particular thought is not my personal preference nor something I generally would read... I did because he is a personal friend... and let me tell you there is MUCH MUCH WORSE out there... I'm still crying over some of the terrible things I've read in the last 48 hours.

Now then...

The only true complaint I have for this is the sheer fact that why is it that Grey and ICE mage used WATER rather than just some chilly hands or some quick ice-make? Makes no sense to me... Not to mention the fact they are now having intercourse (if you can call this that) in a soggy bed... Past that the writing is well done and the word usage depicts a picture you can clearly imagine. So all in all well done as far as from a writing and creativity stand point.