This story has a lot of potential. It’s the grammar that throws me off from truly enjoying it. Maybe find a beta to edit or proof read your chapters after a while. Other than that, this is a good story line!

Legit can't wait for your next update I check every day xxx

I love this story so much keep going with it it's so good

LOVE IT!

I think your story is great. I would like to see the relationship between Eric and Deca. The possibilities are endless ;-)

I love it, u r an awesome writer!

Really enjoying this story. Hope to see an update soon.

Such a good chapter keep up the updates ️

I just came across your story and fell in love! I hope nothing bad happens to Deca and that she and Eric have an happy ending together :'( will four ever find out what Deca is there for and vise versa for her about him being divergent? Anyway, all the best for the next chapter! Update soon please! If you skip to divergent please let Eric end up with Deca happily hahs I'm a sucker for those good endings with families and all

my new favourite story! please let tori and her become besties! love love love this story! please update soon!
also, I think it would be interesting if Jeanine decided to trust her, and what if she met tris before tris transfers or at least tris' parents. maybe even a connection to johanna :)

Please update I love it!

This is the best I just love Eric and deca together :)!
Update as soon as possible please :D
You have a new fan

I'd love to see more Eric/Deca! Btw, good story :D

I would definitely be interested in seeing Deric develop throughout the story (see what I did there)! Thanks for the update! :D

You have to be a Supernatural fan. And I just love Eric and Deca's relationship. Did you base it off of Sam and Dean's?