Haha this was a very funny nice story!

Guess Luffy's learning things from Mr Toriko eh? XD I love how this story goes, showing how everyone was feeling about the situation while underlying the very urgent need to get Luffy back to normal. And the ending was adorable because everyone was smart enough to know what Luffy was going to do next once their goal was accomplished. But was there a reason not to use the Coup De Burst? Or was it because Luffy used up all the cola?

xD This was cute, funny, and oddly sweet. It was serious, but not angsty, and everything felt right. I like it.

Hahaha I loved it! You know, I was looking for a story that had something to do with luffy's rubber body going wrong, and I thought this story was genious! I loved how you switched the character focus in each chapter but still made it flow as a whole. The little LuNa part was cute too! XD It was so fun to read, too! Awesome work!