Loved your story telling.
Read all chapters in one happy reading session.
You are very talented. Continue on.

I had made a review on chp37 last year. I wanted to know the extent of Lizzy's scars from wearing a metal corset. Coming across your story again, I looked it up the on the net and... Damn! So shocked! it slows down the functioning of one's internal organs... And Lizzy never got the justice she deserved!

Yes a definite cop out! Add something to give this the ending it deserves, good story until the ending. I can't give it the rating it deserves.

Only on chapter 2 but here's a run down of terms of address for different titles:

King and Queen: 'your majesty' (if talking to them), his/her majesty or their majesties (if talking about them).
Princes and princesses: your (royal) highness (to them), his/her/their (royal) highness(es) (about them).
Dukes and duchesses: your grace (to them), his/her/their grace(s) (about them, 'duke/duchess of _ is nessessary if their presence is being announced but otherwise optional. Acknowledgement of full title applicable to all ranks e.g. Lady (surname) Countess of X when being formally announced). Lord/lady (insert surname) may also be permissible.
Marquess and Marchioness: my lord/lady or lord/lady (surname) (to them). Lord/lady (surname) (about them).
Earl and countess: as above.
Viscount and viscountess: as above.
Baron and baroness: not 100% sure but probably as above.

Children of the nobility:
Heirs - eldest sons, most will hold a title of lower rank than their parents and should be addressed according to this title.
Younger sons - generally 'mister (surname)' but may occasionally be 'the right honourable mister (surname).
Daughters/unmarried sisters - if their fathers are earls or higher, they would be addressed as 'lady (first name)'. If their fathers are viscounts or lower, they would be addressed as 'Miss (surname)' for the eldest daughter and 'Miss (first name) for younger daughters.

Only the wives and possibly mothers of the title holder would be addressed as 'lady (surname)'. Widowed mothers of title holders would also be addressed as 'dowager (title)'

E.g. Duke of X would be 'his grace the duke of X'. His wife would be 'her grace the duchess of X'. Their oldest son would be 'lord (surname) _ of Y'. Younger sons would most likely be 'right honourable mister (surname)'. Daughters and unmarried sisters of the duke would all be 'lady (first name)'. The mother of the duke would be 'lady (surname) dowager duchess of X'.

People who know the title holder or heir well may simply refer to them by their surname or title. So duke of X would be '(surname)' or 'X'.

Hope that clears things up for you.

I'm a bit confused about Bingley right now. In P&P, he isn't a lord. Just a mister. Have you decided to make him a member of the nobility or is this just an error? Otherwise, it seems an interesting premise.

A bit. I would have liked to have seen a few people get they're comeuppance. You said Fanny, Jane, and Lydia would make an appearance. I would have liked to have seen Mary marry Bingley and Carter marry Georgians. The Italian grandmother would have been nice, especially if she came for Lizzys wedding.

Dear writer,
You have a very poor command of the english language and absolutely NO writing tallent. Stop writing and please enroll in a language course. Are you 10 years old?

A metal corset! Yikes! Wish you could have explained the extent of her scars.

Canon is the spelling of the music. It's quite sad that Elizabeth has been so abused by her mother and two sisters. Hopefully we will get an answer as to why and why her father ignored it.

Laird not lard! It's a toss-up to see who is more evilMrs Bennet or Lady Catherine.

Error in the first paragraph: it's Mary with Richard and not Jane! Great so far!

Minor spelling errors along with some grammatical errors need correction. But the story is quite good! I'm confused though about why Mrs Bennet is so nasty to the three.

finish jt

Lots of spelling errors throughout. It's a great story. It's always interesting when Lizzie and at least one of her sisters rise above Mrs Bennet and are happy. An evil Jane? So different from the usual that it's wonderful!

Please continue...It's top good to not complete

no it's not aa cop out, I think it was a great chapter, as a matter of fact I like all 37 chapters and was wondering if you had any plans to update soon, as I love a good E&D romance, anyway can't wait to read more, thanks ever so much.