| Reviews for Corvus Sirius Black |
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Potterhead2174 chapter 1 . 9/6 Actualize por favor, es una historia muy buena |
Beans chapter 12 . 8/13 This chapter was very interesting. Your idea of making the castle sentient was brilliant and innovative. It makes sense after all. |
Jay chapter 14 . 8/13 Hi, I hope you are doing well! Are you planning on continuing the story? I know it's been months since the last update but I would love to see how your story unfolds! Hugs xx |
Tenjo chapter 1 . 7/27 Are you twelve or something? This is reminiscent of the stories I wrote in sixth grade; both in quality of story and quality of writing. |
Vampireking40 chapter 13 . 7/13 Will this story be continued as I am looking to what happens next for Corvus and Draco. |
Vampireking40 chapter 5 . 7/13 I believe the correct potion would be the potion to cure boils as its the one with Porcupine quills. |
Sparky She-Demon chapter 14 . 7/1 I am hoping they get caught and caught badly! |
Lady Annabelle Slytherin chapter 4 . 5/14 I forgot to ask earlier but what happened to Corvus' great-grandparent's Arcturus and Melania Black? |
Lady Annabelle Slytherin chapter 2 . 5/14 If Corvus is Sirius' son then wouldn't that make Arcturus and Melania Black his great-grandparent's too because Sirius is their grandson through his father Orion who is obviously their son. |
Kistune Tremblay chapter 14 . 5/14 NNNNNnNnNNnOoOoOoOooOoOoO! Who will guess the basilisk? Will Sherlock come and save them all? Will a Agatha Christie or a Maurice Leblanc descendant helps them? Aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh I can’t wait! |
Kistune Tremblay chapter 9 . 5/12 French tralestion errors: Présenté not présenter(verbre) Rencontrons(? Not sure wich temps frame) Sur vous,jeune homme( ou garçon), poursuiveurs not chasseur( look football and soccer) Sorry for being a language thing,it just bugs me, still it’s really good! |
Kistune Tremblay chapter 3 . 5/10 Be careful with your grammar(?), you’re missing some dots and replace a “to” to a “ti”... and check your speaking phrases,you missed a snake talk! |
Child of Dreams chapter 14 . 5/9 Yes to Dobby. |
King Cam the 1st chapter 14 . 5/9 Great chapter, I'm so glad you updated. I do want dobby but he can't be an elf from the Malfoy's because they're meant to be good. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope you update soon and stay safe. |
Dr1zzy chapter 14 . 5/9 Thx for the update |