Interesting story I look forward to more in the future.

Awesome fic. I wish you would continue it.

LOL. This is great! Please continue and update soon!

LOVE this story! wishing for more updates! :)

Hope you continue this story! Really can’t wait to see Magikarp finally train or evolve to Gyardos and scaring the shit outta the Hyuuga.

LOL, making Hanabi's first word karp is just perfect. I love it.

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There is an inconsistency in this chapter with Karp-Karp first not knowing Hinata’s name, but then soon after refers to her by name. It’s around the part where he first sees Tora

I love it XD please update as soon as possible X3
Wonder if you will let magikarp evolve into gyarados
I can't wait! X3

so, just wanna say that this is a freaking ADORABLE story
i would love to see more of it :) learn more of Karp-Karp's backstory, and wether or not he's ever going to be made into a 'nin-animal' that would probly work for gaining experience ya?

more plz

Awsome story please upadte soon
I really wnat to know what happens next but this story looks to be abandoned so Please Upade or atleat explain why there are no updates

I really hope Hinata gets a Pokémon that's fire and/or electric type. The Naruto wiki says that those are her affinities (or at least she uses jutsu of that nature over other natures) and a Pokémon with or both (if one with that dual typing exists) of those types would be nice nod to that.

Of course, I'd be disappointed if it doesn't happen, but I'll still follow the story.

Haha, I love the Magikarp xD it's far too smart for its own good. I hope you have Magikarp evolve when Hiashi is taking training too far at one point and scare the shit out of him xD That would be hilarious! Cant wait to read more

I'm just grinning madly for when Karp Karp turns into a Gyarados.