Very well written, I liked Grace as a character, not to many ACC's that I can say that about. I liked the idea behind the story, I think you should make a sequel. Good job man, have a nice day.

You should wright more of this.

Another beautifully written fiction. Grace is well rounded and perfect as a narrator, simply casting her views and observations to us, as she interacts with the Children. Again you portray Hikari as more than a secondary character and a love interest of Touji casting her as a normal girl, rather than the common tack of the Class Representative. I would gladly read more of Grace’s stories about Tokyo-3. And you do write a lot, don’t you? Good thing you’re talented.

Random, you've done it again...

Once agin you've given us all a great story, with great charcterisation, and "real" feeling...

(I wish I could do that... )

I think that what you said about Shinji was very correct, and that in today's society, that kind of relationship is hard, if not impossible to come by. So I guess that means that Shinji will be lonely for a long damn time.

By the way, I liked the story, it was funny and managed to get a message across at the same time. Good work.

I ought to send you something really nice, cause you deserve something for this one. Brightened my day; it was a lot of fun.

All hail the new story bearing the unique quality mark of Random1377.

Yet another very good piece of fiction has reached the light of the web and for that we should give thanks.

Seriously, great job as always.

Eagerly awaiting more - Gamiel

Another amazing piece of work, Random. I applaud your skill. :)

Is that really how girls think? Or is that what YOU think?

I never liked Grace from CB. Too annoying. Always wanted to strangle her. But I guess that was the point. Ah well...

Superb story. At first I thought it was going to be another "Cute girl lands Shinji" pairing, but instead it turned out to be a very good "slice of life" story. Also a great characterization of Shinji...anyone who thinks he's a total wimp should realize the responsibilities he has, and this fic did a good job in showing that. I'd like to see a sequel to this.

I really liked this one a lot. It is nice to see an ACC that _doesn't_ end up with the canon characters.

Keep it up! I love what I've read of yours.

Just a thought... Future story... have her meet Kaworu. I've always wanted to see what would happen if someone who wasn't one of the Children met him. (Maybe I'll do that myself after I finish my current story . . .)

At first, I was reading this and thought hey Random's first real foray into an ACC/Shinji pairing, well not counting Angelica in Chain of Command. Then you show why no normal intelligent girl could be with Shinji. All the things in his mind his complexities, do make him almost untouchable except for those who share in his worries. Nice job, and I hope you think of Crossovers as you'll soon run out of pairings with the Eva cast soon!

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well,i have my opinions just like anyone, but unlike Ryoma...my statement is Damnit! dont you EVER stop writing...(in the good sence of the statement, of course)

An outside participant child who doesn't plit EVA... ah! Heh... liked the emotions in this. The lesson of friends/lovers strikes too close to home for my comfort though... ouch! Nice way of adding 'real-life' teen issues to EVA. The HS couples' lifespans are measured in weeks, not years.

For an ACC, she kicked ass. I really did believe that she acted like a teenager girl, wow.

Amelia? Would that make Asuka into Lina?

well this is good... like so many of ur works... but didn't u find it hard to write in a girls perspective since ur a guy? (at least i hope u are a guy") and i agree with Royma.. don't u ever stop writing?

Great story!