It did get a bit confusing at the end, and I would have loved a bit more (why didn't anyone look in the forest for him, who was after him, what is everyone's reaction to them coming out the forest). But you're the only one I've seen attempt anything close to this concept, and what a glorious concept! The setting is lovely and perfect for this pairing. Thanks for writing!

ohh this was so cute
I love that they didn't regret it a Little bit, just felt sorry about the lack of consent
damn that was good

Oh, come on! I want to know what their parents did! How Winona was gonna kill Jim, and how many ways! How often Amanda gushed over Spock and Jim being a couple, and how Jim was her knew son-in-law! How Sarek would just stare at the rash actions Jim, but at the same time trying to come-up with a not-feeling to express his gratitude for finding and returning Spock to his mother, and acceptance of his son's chosen. Oh man! Is there going to be a second part to this? If not, I will look into reading some more of your fics on Spirk! They are starting to be my fave! XD

I want more!

interesting Story and how they found each other
hope there will be a second part to this Story...maybe also who this guys where, why they did it and how they where punished..., how spock and Jim explain things happened to there parnts and a bit of there life
please write more Storys like this and a second part to this Story when you dont already have one

too Cute!

Hello! It's me again... I've read a few of your fanfics lately and I saw your responses to my comments, so I first wanted to thank you for that !
And I also wanted to tell you that I definitely like you ! x) You're now in my favorite authors !
I really like the way you write, and your ideas are always fun to read ! Thank you for your fanfics, I've had a really good time reading them ! Please, keep going !

Ps : English isn't my native language so I may have made mistakes, sorry for that. ;)

Super nice, I want more ;)

THIS WAS ABSOLUTE PURE AWESOMENESS!
I LOVE THIS STORY SO DAMN MUCH!

That was so much fun. I wish there could be more.

Ahhhh I have now read all of your stories, and have to say I kind of hate you! Nahh kidding, but I'm supposed to study but all I finding myself doing is reading your stories! I can't get enough! They're really amazing and adorable. Please don't stop writing, would love to read more of your work :D

Ah, cliffhanger...

i must say that this is a super adorable story and a primal Spock claiming Jim before even explaining himself was priceless i think i might find myself reading this story again

Me likey some cave Vulcan! That was great! Hey, if you could come up with some new ways to play out the cave-Vulcan idea, I'd love to read it! Great work, love to see more from you. :D

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