Great, emotional story! I wish we had gotten more of this in the series. :)

Blessings,
~Fierce

Holy shit, I absolutely loved this. Poor Neal’s thing about life imploding without warning is you can’t get attached to anyone or anything was super-relatable and ugh this made me cry honestly. Wonderfully written, and super-touching too; I feel light you captured the characters really well. Kudos! :)

I think I may spend all day reading your fan fiction. It's excellent. You capture Neil and Peter incredibly well. Neil's unwilling emotional side was incredibly endearing as is Peter trying to take care of him. Great job.

Glad Peter got to see Neal unmasked. It should him another side of Neal. One that stays hidden.

This was very good. It would be difficult to be so defenseless, so vulnerable in front of someone who is the boss and a friend. Neal needs his personas to get through this and the drugs took that away. Very good.

That was wonderful!

Loved it! Please keep writing fanfics about Neal and Peter! The intensity and depth of their relationship in your stories is amazing!

Beautifully written. You touched the essence of their unique partnership. These men share a bond that holds true even through adversity, mistrust and fear.
Adore your first story.

You have me hooked. Thrilling beginning.

Wow. This was a very moving piece. You walked that thin line so well, keeping them in character, yet letting both of them stretch their own comfort zones. As an author myself, and devoted reader, keeping people in character is not a huge concern of mine-it's called fiction for a reason. But boy howdy, you are a master. I'll be certain to follow your writing. Thanks for providing such a wonderful story.

I really enjoyed your story. A great combination of Angst, Whump & Bromance. It was quite the emotional rollercoaster for Neal and I love how Peter was there to help him through it. I especially liked how Peter was the one to say how much alike they are when it comes to dealing with emotional stuff.

Looking forward to reading more of your fic. :)

I quite liked the story. It was nice to read one where Neal wasn't the suave controlled man we all know and love. Thanks.

Loving this vulnerable Neal/protective Peter. This whole chapter was so heartwarming. A wonderful ending to a wonderful story. i hope we hear from you often in the future.

Can't get enough of this story.

Oh my goodness. This is just ripping my heart out. This story is amazing!