You mean to tell me the crew's in dire need of medical attention and the perfect coordinates just magically appear? That's sketchy

The AMNESIA trope?! What on earth do you have to be sorry for! Apart from ut ending where it did of course:(

I haven't been able to focus on reading and enjoying words in anything for several years now, and this story instantly and powerfully brought me so deeply in love with words again. I made an account here JUST to comment on this story. I know this was the last part created, and you might not visit this site nor account anymore, but I just wanted you to know that this story is awesome, wonderfully written, and I will always crave more of it, even if it never happens. I've read all three parts to it several times, over the course of the last few days. Thank you for your story; I know life and inspiration are both fickle sometimes, but I'll still wish it was finished, yet adore what was given.

Please continue. I really want to see how Ezra gets w-2introduced to the crew in Amnesia. And I really want to see more Ezra-Sabine stories! What about something where someone steals Sabine's helmet, and Ezra uses his knowledge of the black market to get it back? I think that has potential.

Please continue. I really want to see how Ezra gets w-2introduced to the crew in Amnesia.

In chapter 10 Sabine didn't seem very offended when she thought Esra was staring at her chest. Maybe she figured that was a sign he was okay. Or maybe she's come to enjoy the attention. Shame we'll never find out.
Seriously, if you ever start writing this again, I swear I will write a detailed review every chapter! So far, yours are the best Rebels stories I've seen so far.

Also, another thought I had while re-reading An Off Day is that Ezra probably wasn't eyeing that woman for her body. He was probably checking to see what valuables were on her that he could swipe and counting how many credits he could get by selling her clothes and jewelry. Old habits like that are bound to die hard.
In fact, a certain smuggler we know did something very similar in the first book of the Han Solo Trilogy. He sat down in a rich person's living room and automatically added up the credits that everything was worth. Of course, those books are no longer canon, but still, I think Han and Ezra have a lot in common, and would probably get along great.
Again, I'd long to see this story continued!

One of the problems with reading a whole story start to finish and then reviewing is you forget some things you wanted to say. So here's some more.

Do we see any sign that Ezra could read before coming aboard the ghost? Because the crew finding out he can't read and someone needing to teach him could be a great one-shot.

Another idea is for Hera to teach him how to pilot, or maintain the Ghost. And they'd probably put Sabine in charge of teaching him to shoot a blaster.

Another idea is for the crew to force him to wash his jumpsuit. I don't know if they have a washer and dryer on the Ghost, but I doubt Ezra would have ever wasted credits on something like a laundromat. It's really weird to picture a crew of Rebels in the Star Wars universe doing something as normal as sitting at a laundromat.

On the subject of cleanliness, I wonder if they had to show him how to use a shower? If Ezra bathed anywhere, it would probably be a lake or a stream on Lothal.

Then there's another thought I had about the Talk chapter. Ezra seems to know the basics, but does he know what happens to a woman's body every month? He's a guy, he doesn't have any reason to know. But living with two women on a freighter, everyone's bound to figure things out eventually. I shudder to picture Ezra asking Sabine and Hera why they're always irritable at a specific week every month! In fact, now I'm wondering if there was a reason that Hera sent Ezra and Zeb after a specific type of fruit way back in episode 4, other than to mess with them.

Another story I'd kinda like to see is Ezra using sleight of hand tactics to do some tricks on Zeb. I'll bet he'd be great at those!

I really like this story, and I hope you decide to continue it some day!

Wow this is good! It seems you've stopped these, but I really wish you'd continue them. The Amnesia arc is good, but so are the taming a Lothrat stories, and the rest of the one shots where Ezra interacts with the crew. I really want to see him finish that speeder, and then make the others jealous by out running them! Another thing I'd like to see is Ezra haggling in a market. He probably had to learn how just to survive, so I feel like he'd end up negotiating every trade the crew makes, and saving them buckets of credits.

Something that I was really hoping to see in the episodes was the Ghost encountering the Millenium Falcon and Han and Hera getting into an argument about who's ship is faster. Hera probably would call Han out on making the Kessle run in 12 parsects, and Han would make a bet with her. I'd say the Falcon would win a race, though I think the Ghost is more heavily armed. I think you could write that story.

Another thing I'd like to see is Sabina's helmet being stolen on Lothal, and Ezra using what he learned on the streets to find it and steal it back for her. That could be a really good bonding moment for them. I guess it might be a bit like when Ahsoka lost her light saber during the clone wars.

Another idea is for Ezra to fall sickj to a disease that most people normally get a vaccine for. He wouldn't have any of that growing up.

When I was reading Brothers in Bunks I wondered if this story would end up going a little dark. When Ezra was begging someone to stop, I though he might have been raped when he was a kid. Some messed up stuff can happen in this world.

During the Talk I was kinda hoping Ezra would say he learned how everything worked from seeing Lothcats doing the deed. I can just imagine the looks on their faces! It was still hilarious anyway!

Those were just some suggestions I have in case you ever pick this story up again. I really hope you return to it someday!

I really love your storiess! please continue the amnesia arc, i'm really curious about what would happen to our blueberry commander !3

Your Amnesia arc is my favorite! Please tell me you’re making a part 4

Pretty good. :)

Man kanan trying to give Ezra "The Talk" was hilarious

Hello! I know that you probably are busy and that's why you haven't updated, but I would love it if you continued the amnesia arc because it is the best I have ever read and I was just thinking about it today and I would love love if you continued/ finished it. I AM BEGGING YOU!

So amazing this book is! :)