| Reviews for Art of Love |
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gabite81 chapter 14 . 9/12 I really this anime and this story I would love to find out what happens next please keep posting more chapters |
Guest chapter 14 . 8/4 Hello! I am a brand new fan. I just spent the last two days glued to this fic. I would have finished it in one but responsibility’s -_-. l loved it so much! I was a little hesitant about it at first cause I was still seeing Miaka as a young girl from the anime but I am so happy I pushed that aside and just went for it. I loved it and I’m just so excited for the rest of the story. It’s definitely a breath of fresh air among all this COVID stuff. I hope your doing well and that the next chapter is ready soon. I am extra excited cause Tasuki is my favorite ;) |
Ember Reverie chapter 14 . 7/28 Poor Tamahome. :( To have to find out like that that the person you love and want to make a life with doesn't have nearly the depth of feeling for you that you have for them. It's heartbreaking. It'd be funny if when he finally gets his turn with her that he couldn't 'perform' because of his emotional distress. |
Lady Aurora Nocturne chapter 14 . 7/23 Yat! Another update! I think the story needed a plot chapter, since Miaka surely needs some time to process all of these intense experiences she's having so close together. Girl talk helps everything, especially with someone as delightful as Yui. Yui's advice was solid and Miaka needed it. Doesn't Tasuki know it's rude to eavesdrop? Hppefully what he overheard will help him and Miaka both have a better experience. I think that will be a fun chapter. :) Can Hotohori come cook breakfast for me, please? Tasuki isn't the only one who likes peaches. I do hope we can have some more Hotohori/Miaka fluff in the future. I'm still wondering what Tamahome and the others have been up to during the last few chapters. Hope you are staying halthy and safe! |
Yusagi chapter 14 . 7/21 Man, I couldn't remember where I left off (I think, now, it was right before Miaka went to the concert), but boy was it breakneck pace from the moment Hotohori was about to cut Nuriko with a pen to now. I feel like the build up could have been longer, so that issues with Chichiri and Nuriko could be worked out more before the sexening (but that's mostly just an excuse to see Hotohori be sappy with Miaka more) but considering the whole story is kind of about the ceremony I see why it would be better to get to it quickly. I hope that there'll be more of them afterward, instead. Miaka with her reverse harem of reincarnated warriors getting to live together as immortals is way too good fluffsmut fix-it potential, it'll be sad if it's gone. I did have a feeling the way Hotohori's attention kept drifting to the marks on her was, in fact, his jealous response and she'd just missed it. I can only imagine she'll have her hands full with warriors looking to make right whatever they missed out on in the ceremony once it's all said and done. That, and I will forever not trust Suzaku or any of the four gods, so I still wait to see what the hidden 'catch' is she doesn't know about. |
ThatPageantGirl chapter 14 . 7/19 By failing to prepare, you are preparing to fail, so Tasuki definitely gets extra points in my book for his foresight. I'm wondering now if he'll gloat on the sly to the other Seishi if he's as successful as he hopes to be. It's also nice that Yui was there for Miaka as support, her prying aside. And it seems that more than one of the men are looking to make repeat performances in the future... |
The Scarlet Rook chapter 14 . 7/19 Yui is a treasure. This woman parts words of wisdom - HEED THEM WELL! Anyhow, a few chapters back, Miaka had wondered if the hickey was going to be a problem. APPARENTLY IT WAS. "...isn't so perfect after all" indeed. I look forward to Tasuki's installment! |
The Scarlet Rook chapter 13 . 7/18 *fans self* Oh my... And Hotohori was supposed to be the BUFFER? I guess two lifetimes of longing and fantasizing puts quite a strain on one's control. And it's intriguing, since the first two men Miaka's been with have had some issues with keeping things under control. Things are gonna get heated when the ceremony's OVER. Mitsukake may need to write Miaka another note. |
The Scarlet Rook chapter 12 . 7/18 Well well well... Chichiri finally gets to take center stage! WE'RE FINALLY AT THE SEXYTIMES, YA'LL! Without going into... *ahem* TOO MUCH detail... Such a good start! The setting, the ambience, the dialogue... And it didn't feel rushed, or excessively drawn out. It was soft, sweet, sensual - such a good setup for future chapters! |
The Scarlet Rook chapter 11 . 7/18 SHAME ON ME - CHAPTER FOURTEEN IS OUT AND I HAVEN'T EVEN REVIEWED CHAPTER ELEVEN! It's so WEIRD to read Chiriko's lines and not know entirely what he might sound like. You capture character voice well enough for the whole group that I can HEAR the English VO cast coming through my screen. I like to brainstorm what he might sound like as a young adult. Any favored VO actors you'd pick for him? But Chiriko's so DARN SWEET and I just wanna hug him. That insecurity of being the youngest, the least physically fit, the boy genius... it's all still there! It's like that scenario when, even if you're a grown adult, you turn back into a teenager around your parents? But not, because they're brothers-in-arms? I feel like this is going to be an adjustment for everyone. THE TEARS THAT CAME when Hotohori saw him OMGGG. Hotohori was the one who BURIED Chiriko, back in the book. Just - JUST - UGH! MY HEART. Good balance of comedic relief and mild deus-ex-Taitsukun reminding us that there is PLOT amid all this. Also, the guys trying to talk to each other AND MIAKA about their sexual histories and boundaries was GREAT. Thank god for Nuriko to break the ice, and Chiriko to be pragmatic one (gotta have one objective thinker in the group!) about who goes when. ONWARD! |
Kilataia chapter 14 . 7/18 Love it! Tasuki has always been one of my favorite seishi :) I think Miaka needed some girl talk, it’s a lot to take in for her. |
rosesterling100 chapter 13 . 4/16 this. story. is. everything! I was actually looking for something exactly like this so thank you for writing it! I read it all today and I'm so excited for the next chapter! |
Guest chapter 13 . 4/7 I feel like I've been screaming incoherently for hours while I was reading this? It's so hot. And perfect. And dear God your Chichiri is just (starts screaming again)- I CANNOT. BREATHE. I never expected this quarantine to lead me back to Fushigi Yugi or to this fic, but I'm grateful nonetheless. Thank you so much for writing this! 3 |
Lady Aurora Nocturne chapter 13 . 4/4 Here it is, the chapter I've been waiting for! And it did not disappoint! I really enjoyed this more playful, relaxed version of Hotohori. His antics with Tasuki were very entertaining. I can definitely see him wanting to take care of others in his new life. Where can I sign up for that cooking class he's offering Miaka? The love scene was very well done. I felt a pang when Hotohori mentioned picturing their wedding night. I'm so glad he finally got to be with her. What is Tamahome doing while waiting his turn? Did he go bar hopping with Tasuki and Hotohori or did the other Seishi keep him away from his old rival? How is he handling the jealousy? I hope you are able to stay safe and avoid stupid family members for the rest of the pandemic. Take care of yourself too. Thanks so much for uupdating again so soon! :) |
ThatPageantGirl chapter 13 . 4/4 "This is how I always envisioned us, on our wedding night." That right there, that just broke my heart. I adore Hotohori and to have his long-suffering, one-sided love verbalized in such a visceral way was almost too much. He and Miaka would make an absolutely beautiful couple and I loved seeing this glimpse of what their life together could be like, even if it was for a short while. I am completely unashamed of how much I enjoyed this chapter (especially the lower half :) and I definitely look forward to more. And can I just mention how adorable Hotohori's teasing/mischievous side is? P.S.- Thank you so much for the shout out! |