Omg this is amazing pls continue!

I mean, if you want...

This is really good! You should totally continue! I really like this! It's different! Not much people use Circus Gothica and Freakshow in the Fics. I've been wanting to find one that did. And I did! This is really good especially for a first Fic. :)

love it continue

Awesome start!

This is amazing!

It's a fantastic plot that I would have stolen if it wasn't for the fact that a) it's probably illegal and b) I'm too busy with my own fanfic. I really loved the idea and your writing style had me hooked from the very start! Angsty/dark fics are my favourite types to read *and* write but even if this isn't as dark as I thought it would be (yet) I'm in love with how you portrayed the beginning of the plot and each character. You developed Sam especially really well and the way she was completely clueless about why Jazz and Tucker were nervous of Circus Gothica. It made me laugh slightly, which is an incredible feat counting that I'm too exhausted to smile (riding a four-year-old gelding takes WAYY to much out of you).

Seriously, you're an incredible writer with so much talent and you should be proud of this! Please, please, please, PLEASE continue; I'd love you forever! ;D

Also, thanks for the review on my own fanfiction (y'know, Traumatized, the abuse!fic?). I appreciated it so much.

-Kinetic.

Hell of a first fan fic! Dam. I'm trying to figure out some details about your AU, but on the whole you have it so well written that I can already infer the answer to my question. Awaiting the next chapter eagerly. I hope that you finish this to it's proper length (don't rush things, and please have an ending in mind)

You got into my (admittedly long) favorites list. Thanks. It was a surprising little gem!

RFYS! (Read From You Soon)

Pterodactyl

Yikes, what happened? And why is he all chained up? Well, I guess we'll never know exactly what happened, such as WHY IS THERE A GAPING WOUND IN HIS SIDE?! O_O;;
I'm thinking it might be interesting to see some other chapters from Danny's POV, especially if you go with the "Danny doesn't remember what happened while he was hypnotized" idea. Just a thought.

...Man, what was in that drink?

Wow. This sounds awesome. I really am looking forward to seeing more. But this was just updated, and theres only two chapters, and I previously read this chapter...unless this site is being a butt and isn't properly uploading the next chapter...

Sounds interesting. Update soon plz

o-o

What is a 'Circus Freak'? As this person has brought upon my attention.

And is he referring to himself or someone else?

A good intro, but by the time you finally get around to posting things, since you insist on it being finished first, people will have forgotten about it. Better to post it as you write it, since not many readers have the patience to keep checking back.

The summary implies a lot of things, gets the mind wandering about what twisted and depraved stuff you will write about. But the statement that updates wouldn't be for a very long time is enough to drive a reader away. Therefore, my suggestion is to post a few chapters at a time, as you write it, so that way the wait is shorter.

As for my suggestions about the story itself, I can't suggest anything without knowing what you have planned. The summary is poetic, but non-descriptive and tells us nothing about who will be involved in what. I mean, is the "necrophliac" Freakshow, Sam, or both? Is this going to be a DannyxSam, or maybe a FreakshowxDannyxSam? Will Freakshow be nailing Lydia? You didn't imply anything about the story itself, just that ghosts will be getting drunk and someone's gonna be screwing the dead while crazy circus stuff goes on around them. And apparently teenagers are whining about not getting any.

I'd like to see what it is, but I lose interest in a story if it doesn't update for years. And the intro isn't enough to hook me if I know it's not going to be posted for a long time.

Please take my comments and suggestions into consideration. I hope to see what you have planned for this story.