ah this is why kya and lin are still single in LoK! oh my first time to read a lok fic that is not korrasami and i love it!

thank you for this

Aww, come on you have to carry on with this story. There has to be more.

aahhhh i forgot that i read this on tumblr but then forgot to review here! woops

this is one of the best kyalin fics i've ever had the pleasure of reading, i love it so so much. you write them absolutely perfectly, but that's no surprise. my presh children :') i love them so much

Nice read.

I wasn't even aware of how much I shipped this until just now. This was andolutely adorable.

Hey that was great, so cute and fluffy, I love how Lin is weak to Kya! I think you should write about when they sleep together, but not sleep sleep, you know... :P

Aww, so cute! This was written beautifully great job! XD 3 3

This. Is. Absolutely. Fabulous.

I like this. Completely new pairing for me. Look forward to the sequel.

Yaaaaas

LOVE IT! Continue, you fabulous writer you..! ;)

Ohh! I'm keeping an eye on this, it's interesting!

I really liked this story. And I also like that they had dated previously, and wasn't a 'love revealed' type of story. I think you captured the characters pretty well. And the pacing of the story was great.

ugh, this was fantastic. i love kyalin and i love it more when i can read it. though if there is one thing to criticise it's the fact that there was only kissing. hahaha. look forward to the sequal

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