Awesomeness please continue

“i would like to thank my beta, GetsugaCero. with out him, this would be crap.”

Dude, even with him it’s still crap.

Couldn't Neo just use her illusions to project her voice in order to speak?

Nice story so far. A good number of mistakes but great none the less. For instance, of "Hot 'pace' of ass" it should be "Hot 'piece' of ass". "To bitter" is supposed to be "Too bitter". But still a great story that I can't wait to read more of! Also, as for the Harem thing, Yes, but tastefully.

Cool. Naruto has the same kind of arm that Adam Jensen has in the second Deus Ex game.

I won't read this... you have completely butchered the character that is Naruto in a single chapter, congratulations.

Sounds a nice story, outside of a few mistakes and someone failing too easily for Naruto(oh, well, he's a rock star after all). Hoping to see lots of good fights, singular pairings alone and changes to most arcs. See you soon.

Whoa what happen to this village

Im glad that you are doing this fic again. you already know what i think about beta. one tiny issue i have is glynda being so quick to lash out

good to see ya back on this i enjoy this story so much and i glad to see your return

hope to see you update this story sometime when able to

Love the Hellsing Ultimate Abridged reference. Team4star FTW

This was a great chapter.

Please keep up the great work.

Hope he gets better.

There are multiple occurances of the word 'anime' where I feel 'animal' was intended..