| Reviews for Subtle Orange |
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   the grey mage chapter 1 . 5/18 Fuck I wish all these Ron character study docs were in one long ass story. |
| Zer0Night chapter 1 . 11/19/2018 this is very interesting. i like how you set it up, i hope so see where this leads |
| duskrider chapter 1 . 5/26/2018 Rather interesting. |
| TheLast InfiniumScribe chapter 1 . 8/18/2015 I think a good direction to take this would be... u know what? I'll do it myself. |
| Crystalbullet chapter 1 . 7/17/2015 Just curious is there like a sequel to this story aswell or not. Cause this is starting to get really fucking good. I really wanna see how Shego and Rons relationship turns out. |
| Data Seeker chapter 1 . 2/12/2015 Hi Nice one shot. The narration, suspense, drama and depth. Ron's thoughts about evil and what he has seen and when he became Zorpox are dynamic. Everyone has a dark side, yet Ron feels lingering darkness from when he became Evil and his fears and doubts are excellent. This is what I think of the wholesome standards. Except for a vulgar word or two, the language is clean. Nothing is suggestively. No extreme violence or any other vile content. I hope this review brightens your day. God bless Data Seeker |
| daccu65 chapter 1 . 2/10/2015 Awesome one-shot that screams for a sequel. Loved the tale and this could be the start of a major story arc. |
| Origin Unknown chapter 1 . 2/10/2015 This is fantastic. I haven't seen much of this insight before, and it's really interesting. You could look into extending this into a full story, but I also like it as a one-shot; it allows the possible to happen. You have a great writing style, and the story flows very nicely. Keep up the good work! |
| Flames of Azure chapter 1 . 2/10/2015 Oh please do this. I want to see where Ron goes. |
| loganhunter2 chapter 1 . 2/10/2015 Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude no more one shots. ...make the rongo ,ronbon and finish the the vanilla story. ..you're killing me here ...hanging a steak in front of me but given me a salad 9.5 / 10 |
| Sharper the Writer chapter 1 . 2/10/2015 There could be something inside him, an inner beast worse than Zorpox... |
| cybercorpsesnake chapter 1 . 2/10/2015 Great one shot. Keep up the good work. |
| CgC chapter 1 . 2/10/2015 Good story but please update "Unexpected future" and write the promised sequel to "Best friend with benefit".And I think that story is a prequel to your Rongo story. |
| dracot chapter 1 . 2/10/2015 Power Ron _ continúe please |
| CajunBear73 chapter 1 . 2/9/2015 A ticking time-bomb he's become? Wonder what he'd have to do about Kim when that day comes to become more than what he's portrayed. CB73 |
