| Reviews for Hurt and Abandoned |
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   carol.s.jones chapter 19 . 5/26 Can you please let me know if your going to continue this story as I've enjoyed reading it and want to read more thanks for a great story |
| hadou421 chapter 19 . 10/9/2019 I love this story I really wish you could continue it as I haven't seen fanfics of this quality very often, even less that are also complete. |
| Toby Hark chapter 19 . 5/14/2019 I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer! |
| Crossoverlover242 chapter 19 . 3/29/2019 Awesome story so far |
| Poke-ranger21 chapter 1 . 12/14/2018 please update your story is awesome so far and I want to find out what happens next |
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/15/2018 Ash as SO meany Pokémon... I can’t keep up with them. |
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/14/2018 What Happens |
| Mermaid's Magic chapter 2 . 6/9/2018 Hey question could you have Paul see the light? I mean I happen to like Paul well all but his 'training' methods |
| darkwolffe01 chapter 14 . 4/18/2018 I actually have my own dark / electric type called thundark and it's signiture move is dark volt |
| corvilius chapter 19 . 12/7/2017 are you dead? plz dont be dead! |
| Reality demon chapter 2 . 12/2/2017 FAIRY TAILLLLLLLLLLLLL |
| Guest chapter 19 . 11/28/2017 Just call me Zexal Digisaiyan Ash. I'm not a writer, so don't look for me. I am really impressed with this work of yours. I would love to see more. Also, maybe you can add in two Pokemon for Ash to have on his team: one is a Snivy that is a male named Vero. The other is a Dewott male named Zoro. The Snivy is a nice but quiet Pokemon and doesn't socialize that much. However, he has a kind heart and is willing to accept new friends. The Dewott is a nice Pokemon that is like an older brother to the Snivy since they were both abandoned by their trainers. Dewott is very overprotective and has a hard time trusting other Pokemon and has a really tough time for trusting humans. Also, they both have a cool boy attitude, but the Snivy shows more emotion than the Dewott. I dunno if you will continue this story or not, or if you do then I dunno if you will get this post, but I would love to have a chance to see this continued on because this is a really good work of art. Please keep up the good work! |
| Gold Testament chapter 3 . 11/5/2017 Yeah next time they see Samurai, he's going to get a super spark from Volt and tied up to be Beedrill bait by Weedle. Points for getting Misty to accept one of the cute bugs. Specially since in the anime I'm pretty sure she'd only like Combee. |
| Gold Testament chapter 2 . 11/5/2017 Huh so at the start of his Kanto journey Ash is abandoned AND shocked by Pikachu and winds up with his first three Pokémon being Sinnoh natives? |
| Gold Testament chapter 1 . 11/5/2017 I'm amazed one of the Spearow didn't decide to join him. Specially the one he hit with a rock. |
