definitely what I hoped for when I finished reading Dear John

This was amazing! 3

Beautiful

Hi!
So, I'm french (sorry for the mistakes, english... just isn't my best topic),and I just leave a review because I have already red some of your fanfictions and I really loved them... This one more than the other, I think that you can't either imagine how pleasant it is to read some french sentences in an english text... XD thanks for the effort, I know how this language can be difficult sometimes (even with Internet... -') and there isn't that much mistakes in what you wrote.
Even without it the story is pretty nice and I love the psychological (I don't know if you can say it like that in english...) side of the characters... I would love to read more of your stories!
Petite00
PS: Woaw... When I red this sentence in french from Sherlock... I just want to say that if I was in his shoes I would have blushed to... x)

love this little series

Hey !

It's funny how I prefer porn in English and how some of it comes in French in your fanfic'... I guess foreign languages while sex is appealing for everyone x')
This was magical ! I like this couple, these broken hearts finding there own - obvious - way to get fixed, even though I thought John really was a dick, at first. Sure, he can be angry. But still. And Sherlock looked to much like a prey for me too. But, fortunately, the Doctor was able to see he'd come too far and Sherlock could express his feelings.
Not long a review, still French, I can read English but not really write back my thoughts exactly (I'm so far from this). Or maybe I should write it in French so at least, with a translation, you'd be able to know how your fanfic made me feel... I'll think of it.

Anyway ! Thanks a lot for writing it, it was a nice reading and a good way to conclude this e-mails exchange of them !
I saw you have lots of fanfictions published on this website so... I guess I won't get bored soon !

Bye !
NausS

Spot on...

words are not enough but ...

but still...

WOW

(btw when another language is used in a story... and I don't understand it at all, I don't usually translate it because I like that mystery of it, and that it could be anything,
or simply sometimes it isn't supposed to be known like in here - just like how John doesn't know it...

But I had to understand this, so I G. translated it
And I'm glad because it was so hot. it added another layer of sexyness to it... )

whole this was so perfect... A perfect way of ending your main fic...

You wrote a Sherlock /John fic worth remembering and rereading...

LOVED IT and THANK YOU

MERCI Beaucoup :-D

Andddd the perfect ending to Dear John. Agh
So perfect. I hope everyone read this, I'm just imagining all the people who read Dear John (look at all the reviews) were left with such a unsatisfactory ending. Not because it was bad, but because they didn't kiss, make up, and have sex. Perfect! Keep up the writing. :D

Love

*brain dribbles out of ears* *mumbles incoherently* Yeah, so, uh...*that* happened. Even if a mild version of that happened on the show...yeah. You know. That. Happened. *licks lips* Is it hot in here?

So beautiful!

I laughed at the flash back conversation from Study in pink. The boys have come a long way.

Just one note, can you use simple terms instead of actual anatomically correct descriptions for the parts of the body. I cant visualize when you do this.

Throughout "Dear John" and the first two chapters of this story one had the impression that Sherlock, by contacting John, was proceeding down a long dark tunnel without ever really knowing if there would be a light at the end of it, but realizing that maybe all could be lost with one misstep. To take a chance and hope beyond hope that at the very least a friendship could be saved and at the most a relationship could be achieved. You've had my heart beating with every word. I am so looking forward to "The Hiatus" and "The Date".

There is such a hunger here. The hunger to do the right thing with each other. The hunger of wanting, needing, having. The hunger of not disappointing. Hopes and dreams and so much on the line that one can cut it with a knife. One wrong move and that line is severed. One misinterpretation and a joined life of possibilities lost and then with the last sentence redemption. Brilliant.

How well you know the psyche of these two men...it's like you are the proverbial fly on the wall but inside their heads. This is like no first time story I have ever read before. These are not just some superficial characters to you. They have depth. You have 3-D thinking. You know and plan every nuance, every emotion, every cause and it's effect. Very nicely done.

Sweet and smut. Perfect.