| Reviews for The god of Ages |
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   Johnsmythe2oo2 chapter 17 . 10/23 A buddy you got a lot of grammar mistakes and some parts of this story feels very boring ... Artemis was the goddess of maidens since she was granted her goddess hood . do you think that Artemis would just fall in love with percy so very easily huh.. Read the fanfiction story "Titan of the Huntit is one of the best Pertemis stories ever and try to look into Artemis in the greek mythology will ya ... oh and rewrite this story dude |
| Callum Runchman chapter 17 . 8/11 If you don't like it then I'd say rewrite the 2nd one however I think that having a character called Annabeth chase who's also blond and smart isn't a good idea. Percy loved Annabeth more than himself and would likely have taken an oath on the styx/chaos as part of their marriage vows. Pertemis is good but it will never beat Percabeth. If she is a rebirth that somehow kept her memories then there's no way either of them would be able to stay apart no matter the situation with Artemis and she'd never get with Percy's son. That's just disgusting to think about. |
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/10 Will there be more? |
| chimera629 chapter 6 . 7/18/2019 Just thought about this but how did Percy cause the earthquake that not part of his domains |
| chimera629 chapter 5 . 7/18/2019 Well this progressed faster than I thought |
| chimera629 chapter 4 . 7/13/2019 Hm does Percy not realize liquor doesn't change you it just brings out what's already there |
| chimera629 chapter 3 . 7/13/2019 Why did he have to swear an oath and why does the hunt need a guardian |
| chimera629 chapter 2 . 7/13/2019 Don't like Percy blaming them for his drinking they told him to slow down and he's the one who chose not to listen cUzwt he wanted to get drunk |
| chimera629 chapter 1 . 7/13/2019 Surprised his domains are limited to the sea and the de.i god camps given that regular humans are destructive ,loyal and learn many different styles of swordsman ship. Wonder what he s going to do about his mom and if he'll punish the disloyal and if he can sense loyalty |
| GaleForce513 chapter 6 . 10/21/2018 I AM IN A CRINGED POSITION. DUDE THE SPELLING AND GRAMMAR IS SO... SO... UGH! |
| cornelia chapter 7 . 9/30/2017 ooooo! |
| ExternalDragon chapter 1 . 7/17/2017 Do you even English bro? |
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/22/2017 what is your new name I can't find your other stories |
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/22/2017 i wish that you could spell check this |
| Reese chapter 17 . 1/13/2017 Keep going but I think percy should have more of a guardian angel type role In Thomas life and he should have more of a pov we all know the life of a hero but you have the chance to really show how a god looks at it and I think you should show that more. |
