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How the fuck did I miss super saiyan in I burn!?

Of the TFS references are strong with this one :)

Good God, this has been quite the read. On the last chapter, I really wasn't expecting Jack to be slaved under Jacques, but at the same time, I feel like I should've expected that. The hinted past between Jack and Sebastian.

The references are killing me

A very good way of showing how the winner of wars gets to pen the history books. I love just how f$?king far you've stretched areas of RWBY. The small part of Dr. Oobleck's class, you've not only added to what he'd said, but you've given so much more to World of Remnant. Adding the continent of Skyrim, creating the equivalent of the White Fang, and adding a few techniques of anime (pretty cool that you didn't add lore with them, just the moves themselves.) You've made one helluva story, dawg. Congratu-f$?king-lations! I hope to see more when I start Volume 2 of this.

Right after the beginning Chibi part with Ruby, I'm happy that I have at least one song downloaded that you keep setting the moods with. Does it being from the Transformers soundtrack make me a nerd, though?

I'm happy I played some of Final Fantasy to know who Sazh is. Good game. I got stuck on Thirteen. One of the bosses was frustrating.

Only typing this to say I wanted to like this story but Jack to me for all his tragic backstory is nothing but an asshole. Not saying that you are, just that he is just a terrible human being.

Honey Badger is pretty unique, I like it.

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Oh fanatical cultists, that’s fine then.

Huh Noice!

Huh so thats what your plan was for him...

...yeah fighting an island for of people that could Fus Ro Dah you? Bad idea.