Hmmm... I love the idea and there is a lot of potential but I am going to be honest here. Your start was strong but you butchered a lot of storytelling in order to set up the AU. Things were horrifically rushed and almost everyone was OOC by the end.

The writing could use some touching up as well.

Other than that it wasn't a bad start and I'm hoping that the pacing will right itself in the next few chapters.

Great stuff, one of the best fics I've read. Shame its unfinished but still, I've read it 3 times.

All good, u r good as j.r.r. Martin and what about the rest . Why u stop writing

I hope you don't think that of all of us. Enjoying your story regardless of any discrepancies or different interpretations. If they're still complaining after reading 70 chapters they're either fools or like it more than they care to admit.

A fan

Haha Edric I'd adorable

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

You said jofferys 17 yet you end up saying he's 12. lol that's a neck

Really cool story! I can only hope you will return to the story and finish it! Love Stannis as a loving father who doesn't listen to Melisandre. Also, love that you stole one of Daenerys' dragons out from under her very nose.

well if we want to get technical the North could hold out against the complete might of the south, they have before. The faith launched maaany religious wars against them, and none succeeded or even dented the North's defences. The Riverlands however would be a lost cause in such scenario.

from where does the 45 thousand come from, Stannis who is famed as knowing the full military strength of all the houses in the realm, is he not aware that Jamie Lannister lost 15 thousand and Stafford another 10 thousand?

didn't Catelyn arrive when Robb had already defeated 2 out of the 3 Lannister Armies? those under Stafford Lannister and Jamie Lannister, and they still call him inexpirienced because he is winning the war? before Robbs involvement the Lannister had 50,000 men not long after they only had 20,000. Also by the way, the 20,000 that Robb took south is just below half the full strength of the North, it was a host that they assembled within 2 weeks since they needed to move fast to try and rescue Ned.

Stannis had over 200 ships and 5 thousand men, not 20 and 2 thousand. By the way Stannis unwillingness to treat with the other 'kings' was purely him not Melissandre.
Treating with Lysa is a fools errand, she does not move because Littlefinger tells her not to and that is not gonna change, she refused to move at all when her nephew asked her and even her bannerman pressured her to raise for Robb and yet she didn't. Unless Stannis convinces Yohn Bronze Royce to remove her from power as unfit then the Vale will not move

please continue on with this fic it's really good and it's a shame there hasn't been an update in a while

So... what stops Tyrion from agreeing to join Doran's schemers, leaving and then telling the whole Westeros about his plans?

So Victarion is king... Y'know, I was liking the fic so far, but this chapter is kinda silly. Damphair exiles Euron based on what, a promise about taking the Iron Throne? No one exiled the Lonely Light lord for claiming to have found land beyond the Sunset Sea (wether that is true or not) and Euron's exile seemed kinda forced. And then Euron goes an kills him, and no one does nothing. The most sacred man on the Isles is killed on the most sacred place for the ironborn and he just walks away? One can understand that Victarion wouldn't kill him as he is a superstitious fool, but there are dozens if not hundreds of ironborns present. And no one tries to stop or kill him? Meh. I think I'm not going to like the next ironborn chapters except for maybe Theon on the Wall.