| Reviews for Pokémon Unova Journey VOL 1 |
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HunterHQ chapter 3 . 7/21 In regards to Trip he was once shown with anime exclusive badges and same went with Gary as well as Sawyer from XYZ, maybe you can do OC gym leaders too if you want, maybe include a dark gym which everyone hoped for before Galar. Also shame pikachu couldn't use full power that battle. |
HunterHQ chapter 55 . 7/20 Wonder how Takeru would feel if he met an actual ghost person rather than a Pokemon, elements such as that and the spirit world happened Quite often in the Pokemon series. |
Geneevee chapter 58 . 7/11 Me: He/She is right. Don't listen to that stupid guest. I know you have important things in your life such as School and your personal life. And if you ever need a break, take all the time you need. Due to the CORVID-19 situation, your health is more important than your work after all. |
TTT1050 chapter 1 . 7/6 Don’t listen to the guest who told you to give up. He just doesn’t understand that you’re busy with important things like School and your personal life. So just ignore him/her and you just update the best you can |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3 You should give up on your fanfics since you are a terrible updater. |
Martin chapter 58 . 6/26 If you do a Yugioh GX story on fanfiction, can you please do the english dub version? I think it's better |
Guest chapter 44 . 6/18 Hey 19jchoi can I help you with your Pokemon fanfics like MLPquang20 does on Deviantart by getting you any ideas for you to play with. Also check out your deviantart since there are people who message you there through Notes which I know because a friend of mine message you there. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16 Here is a idea anyone can do: A tree that can grow any berries. |
Guest chapter 58 . 6/15 Here are ideas anyone can do: * A tree that can grow every kind of berries and fruits * A tree that can grow any kind of evolution item and evolution stones. * A galaxy where the planets are filled with Pokemon which shiny Pokemon are normality where non shiny Pokemon are a rarity. * A tree that can grow every kind of berries * A galaxy where the planets are filled with different Pokemon |
Martin chapter 18 . 6/15 I don't like how you edited Chapter 17 and Chapter 18. Please change it back |
HunterHQ chapter 47 . 6/17 Not sure if it's a coincidence but your OCs tend to battle the gym leaders before Ash does, not that I am complaining just that makes his battles seem a little lacklustre at times. |
HunterHQ chapter 2 . 6/13 The OP featuring Takeru fusing with Zekrom makes it seem much like that Pokemon fusion manga. Hopefully it does the legendaries and team plasma better justice along with the Unova elite four like Marshall, Shauntal and Grimsley. |
HunterHQ chapter 50 . 6/12 The way Takeru is afraid of ghost Pokemon is much like Gardenia, at least in the games, but not sure what her reason for fear is. |
TonyMon318 chapter 18 . 6/10 Did you edit this chapter because didn't Takeru catch tepig after he scared off scolipede? just curious. |
TonyMon318 chapter 58 . 5/26 Loving the story so far, great catches for Takeru, especially Darmanitan. I hope i get to see more catches maybe like a Larvesta and others besides Darmanitan is definitely a keeper. |