This story has been great so far. I love your writing style and the OC is very interesting. I hope you'll continue to write more!

Her sensitivity to Naruto is a little heartbreaking but understood. I enjoy your writing style a lot and this idea is interesting. The description of Ananya is very different from most OCs I've read about, making her rather unique in this genre, I appreciate that. :) So far I'm really intrigued! I look forward to finding out where this goes.

I enjoyed this. Very action packed and fast moving. I love the relationship between Kakashi and Naruto. Your bad guys were superbly nasty. I would like to know a bit more of their motivation, if you feel like bringing them back later in the story.

The bit about Ananya feeling something bubbling under her consciousness is intriguing

Ooh, exciting. I might have to start watching Naruto.