I love Bella BEING there for the first time Jacob phases.

I’m so happy I found this story again. It was wonderful, as are you as a writer. Thank you for sharing your gift.

Glad they are finally together. How did Renee deal with Bella's demise?

I have bad feelings about this. James is setting a trap and Bella is going to be left too unprotected.

I really love this story. I also love the way it goes from past to present. You write so well.

Great story, very interesting I'm really enjoying it. I'm confused but hoping it will all pull together at the end. Question about this chapter- How did bella get her car back?

LOVE IT! Wish there was a little more. Thanks for the story:)

This was an amazing story! Amazing job to both of you and I can’t wait to see what happens with the new story!

I’m so impressed and happy with Jacobs character here. Honestly I have mixed feelings when it comes to Jacob in the fanfic community because he’s either just the best friend with no romantic feelings or has too much feeling and doesn’t understand the word no and is a total asshole. This Jacob however is none of that; he’s a carefully crafted, complex character that has clear feelings for Bella and the devotion and loyalty however he also understands that Bella’s heart is taken without really expecting anything after she’s made it clear that her heart is not his. Great work!

This wrecked me but also made me happy but it also made me sad...I just felt all the feelings and I may or may not be crying.

Okay...I love the angst and the hurt/comfort and my right brain in satisfied in the drama...my left brain on the other hand is like all of this could be avoided with a conversation and a well earned slap to the back of the head but like that would be funny but not nearly as satisfying. Great job on writing!

I’m just going say this now...there is too many things unresolved and we are dangerously close to the end. I know these are fictional characters based on other fictional characters but now I’m too emotionally invested in this to stop now and instead of writing my own work I am now obsessed with this work and if anything happens to my sweet summer children I’m going to riot

Damnnnnn...okay I see what you did there; Nice twist! I love this AU of new moon, personally it makes more sense and this twist is one of the best I’ve read. I feel the emotional turmoil could be written with a bit more detail and the pacing slowed down a tad BUT it was still brilliant! Amazing job and I’ve been speed reading this fic for the fast hour! Your very talented!

Ooo very nice touch with the gun man, my angst heart is happy

Welp I know what I’ll be doing for the next few hours, great chapter!