The first story I read that was written by you was A Sacred Summer. A friend recommended this fic to me, and it's amazing to see how much you've improved. :) The story and the lore of all the artists really interests me; it's the first time I've ever read about a concept like this.
By the way! I've noticed that you have a few spelling issues here and there.
"Green stored away this titbit..."
Should be "tidbit".
"Red chocked on his food..."
Should be "choked".
Maybe you'd want to get a beta?
Either way, like I said, it's amazing to see how much you've improved, and I'm really loving this story.
Keep up the great work! :D

Yay! Awesomeness!

Heyy this was one of your first stories I read and I'm reading it a second time now after reading all your old stories. I must say, I can see the improvement you made along the way! There are much less grammatical mistakes, though you still occasionally use the wrong pronoun or typos. The story is clearer now too, when scenes change because in some of the older stories it was difficult to decipher the scene setting.

I just want to say that I really like this story, probably because I love stars it's nice to think of painters painting the beautiful things of nature. And mangaquest shipping is one of my favourite to read because I like how the two characters can interact with each other, especially the mysterious depth of Gold's character. All in all, I am very much attracted to the story and I hope that you would continue writing to give this beautiful story a nice closure. I am curious too as to how everything works out for Gold. I am probably quite emotionally invested in the story so please update someday! But really no pressure, just expressing the wishes to see something I love complete. (:

Yay! New chapter! So many hints on a lot of shippings. Just so you know, I ship all of the shippings shown in this chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter! Good luck on your two jobs!

So KAWAII! Best mangaquestshipping moment I've ever seen. You are one awesome author. Great chapter by the way. See you next chapter!

Awesome chapter as always! Love the plot by the way, very mystical! Keep up the great work! O–O

I'm starting to think that the Gods here are pretty unreasonable. I mean, just give him a break already! He wants to find inspiration for painting, so just let him do it! He'll return to repaint the stars so you won't have to worry about them disappearing or anything. And what do they do? Start to go back on their promise and cause the orphanage to be on the brink of being destroyed. Urgh.

Finished reading chapter 5... Amazing story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter, good luck with the flow of ideas!

Like woah, I haven't reviewed in the last four chapters. Sorry about that by the way

Well anyways, while I haven't reviewed, I realized... woah. There are so many things happening! Also, the shippings are in motion! XD

You have the perfect characterization of Yellow, or at least how I imagine her. People see her as weak and everything (because of the fandom of her shyness even though she's not shy), but you put her as a strong character! How she talked to Lance was hilarious to me. That, and that was probably my favorite part of this chapter XD

Also, I saw the other note, and I'm sorry if offended you or got you mad. I guess I tell authors to update soon because I really want to read the story more because it's really good XP

Well anyways, the few chapters were really good and descriptive! :) Keep up the great work!

- Mai

P.S. Oh my gosh, I have finals too, and I hate them so much.

Let the plot bunnies roam in your mind forever! That's the first thing that comes to my mind when I'm doing this review, sue me if you want to. Anyways great chapter as usual. I can't think of anything else to say. Sooo bye. (It's a rude ending, but I seriously don't have anything else to say.)

Red living in Green's condo huh... I CAN already imagine all the headaches Red would cause by carving on his walls or something. XD

Hmph. Lance, go away. Like, really, nobody needs you here. The job of looking for Gold is in good hands. Now why don't you just go back to doing what you're supposed to do already. *glares*

You have finals and you're still giving us a chapter. OMG I LOVE YOU SO MUCHHH. THANK YOU SO MUCHHHHHH. Good luck for your finals

Hey it's me again. Thank goodness you accepted my apologies. I hope the other person who "annoyed" you apologizes too. This chapter is good just like always. I'll wait for your next update. So see yah.

Wow... well looks like I'm not going to ever say "good/nice/amazing chapter can't wait to see the next one" or "keep up the good work" without either thinking that I might've been trying to force them without considering how things are going in their life or adding "but still take your time" or something like that. Anyway to the chapter it was great! I really enjoyed it also nice reference to Lyra's kid Aries I'm not sure if it's intentional or not plus I've recently read the Muses and I finished it so the fact that the other name is going to be the name of their child it's kinda turning to a thing for me not that I mind also I'm really curious about where things are going I mean I didn't expect to see Lance in this story because I haven't seen him since Beneath the Sea of my Heart and after that the closest thing to him being in a fic is mentions (in your fics I mean) than there are things like Green not being a painter of the Gods in the first place and what'll happen knowing that Lyra will be greatly involved since they're telling her about the painters in the first place. Overall so far I'll tell you this I really like this it reminds me of Gatekeeper of my heart from time to time for some reason I think it's the involvement with the Gods I like the plot the uniqueness compared to the fanfic made by other authors keep up the good work and please take your time just don't make us wait a whole year like other authors and I'll be fine waiting though seriously I've waited for a year for some people so I think I can wait without asking you just please don't end up like them.

OMG that mash potatoes question was so random. Typical Lyra and her never ending curiosity eh? XDXD I don't know if I should be laughing as much as I should now but I can't seem to stop. I hope that Gold doesn't repaint Lyra's memories though. Let's just involve Lyra in this entire mess and let her make Silver's life a more fun and lively one eh?

...I'm a jerk to many authors here on fanfiction... (Sighs) well I can't help myself. you guys make stories that are so good that I want the next chapter to be updated ASAP. I'm really sorry for pressuring you. And besides, I don't have a tumblr account. Right now, I need to go to the nearest wall so I can hit my head on it. One more thing before I go. Please accept my apologies! ( bows down to all mighty pokeluv101)