Nicely, really drown me, also loose end though

Tbh, I think you only made Nozomi General to make that last joke. xD

I LOVED this story! This is one of the best stories I have read in the past year! Good job man, I already read it twice but it's still amazing! I just want to say I loved this story an I hope you make more stories like this :)

"There's something about her [Nozomi] knowing smile that really freaks me outMaki, Soldier Wars AU "There's something about you [Nozomi] that is really freaking me out..." Maki, Otonokizaka Private Academy AU When I read that sentence I couldn't help the instant comparison that formed in my head, for some reason it really made me giddy! Anywoodle I ABSOLUTELY adore this storeh and I am so glad it had a fair amount of NicoMaki in it coz I swear to God those two are like, the comedy relief couple in the fic and helps to ease some tension. Reading your fics, in all honesty, got me confused whether or not Sarcastic Asshole Maki is considered to be OOC. I mean sure in canon she had her sarcastic and vain moments where she'd openly compliment herself to the rest of the gang, but I don't she'll ever reach this level of jerkiness. Even the early version of her which was helluva pompous and vain af, I don't know I just can't see Maki being like that despite her social background being a good reason for it. I admit it's really refreshing from the typical Tsun-tsun Maki not that I have a problem with it and your portrayal of her is just really fucking gold. Just the OOC-ness really irks me slightly. Tho all in all this is definitely one of the best Love Live fics I have ever read since I joined the fandom and I look forward to more of your works. ps. That fucking epilouge is so damn perfect, I am so proud of my adopted lesbians.

This story really got me! it was pretty neat the way you describe the events, specially the suspense ones, I imagined almost everything in my mind xD
I love this story and I'm glad I read it. hope your next update from your others fanfictions

Gayyy

I take it you're probably a Sander's is supporter? xD

Anyway, really great story. This was honestly the best fanfic I've read in a while.

FUCK, that is one hell of a start!

Author sannnn. I've checked out your tumblr and your UmiMaki story was wonderful. But gosh, I want more of it ;-; the lyrics has lots of feels ;-; anyway,thank you!

I love it! Wish you the best Author-san!

I saw this on Tumblr and bad my doubts, but after reading your rich HS AU I couldn't help myself. Great start! I love the idea of the suits and I'm really interested in what's to come.

Reading this feels like wasting two hours watching "Now You See Me 2." The plot is based and set to establish that they'll accept each other no matter what, but every element falls apart (e.g. their OOC characterization, the scheme, the realness of the situation). AU isn't an excuse. All in all, you're trying too hard with this story you might as well write an original story of total strangers.

By far one of the better stories I ahve read, however, I am going to be a bit picky on your character development. While you did do a great job with the leads, your neglect for development in both personality and motives for the villain does paint the picture of a singular perspective is this story, and being a vigilante centered plot, the lack of perspectives does make this story loose it's memorableness that it should have. Because when you look back at the story, you see groups of people who answer to no one, killing off who ever they deem unfit to hold power. Doesnt really sound like the good guys does it? A singular frame of mind emphasises a singular perspective, and in turn, a sense of narrow mindedness for the plot. This ultamitly gives the story a sureal atmosphere of a setting that is there for the sake of there being a plot, making it harder for us to feel emursed within the story. Further more, the lack of motive behind a villain dimishes the weight of the current problem, and in turn, dilutes the importance of the heros' actions. Therefor, we are less involved in the actual problem, and inturn the story. Even bond villains have a motive, though cliched, to their choices. Make us belive the story. Make the impossible sound probable and the surreal seem real. Let us feel like we are apart of the world you have constructed rather than just observing it. Best of wishes- Dalek Zek

...assdjdjfkfkdkslslsllskkfjf this was very bien. I cri. Best rollercoaster of a fanfic yet. I SWEAR YOU BE MESSING WITH MY MIND WHEN YOU MESS WITH MAH NOZOELI.

I just saw this in your bio. God. This is one of the best fic of yours.

I think the plot was not being rushed, and your type of writing really amuse me. It's mind-blowing. Good job!

"So you stop chasing Kisei and start chasing me." OMG. Nozomi's remark echoing in my head as if I was Eli. It was exciting but at the same time it was hurt my heart a lot. She did this because she wanted Senpai's attention. Isn't that sweet.

KotoUmi part was sad too. I almost crying :'( And Nico is the bravest of all. I like her that way.

I love Soldier Game Trio became so hot and cool at the same time. Always love them. They're the best. You're the best, too! 5 thums up!

Keep going for your Otonokizaka Private Academy! I love it so much!

SO COOOLLLLLLL! THEY'RE ALL SO BADASSSS! THIS IS THE BEST FIC I EVER READ. NO, SERIOUSLY. I MEAN IT.

At first I thought that Maki was died, but THANK GOD SHE DIDN'T. AND THE TRIO LOOK SO HOT AND COOL. EVERYONE HERE IS COOL. I THOUGHT NOZOMI'S A BITCH AT FIRST, BUT IN THE END SHE'S COOL TOO. OMGOMGOMG.

Sorry for capslock. Sorry if this review disturb you. I'm a fan of you. This fic is so well prepared. I LOVE IT. The characters have their own personality, and I love the way that they're not OOC. I don't like OOC.

Rin's so cool, too. She's a total badass. But Eli's still my number 1. THE TRIO LOOK SO SEME IN THIS FIC AND I LIKE IT SO MUCH!

You're cool, bro. I'm looking foward for your next badass project. Sorry if there are some grammar or vocab mistakes or typos, and once again sorry if I disturb you with this review.

FAITO DAYO!