| Reviews for my 9 to 5 is cutting open old scars |
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Lex Lexa chapter 1 . 6/20/2019 OOF the combination of 37 and 38, I honestly got a lump in my throat |
oofthatsawrap chapter 1 . 7/31/2018 yoooooooo this was brilliant! can we get a follow-up on #48 tho? ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡) |
Lucy Jacob chapter 1 . 10/2/2015 I really liked how you glimpsed a little at the future, little of the present and a little of the past. It is the first time for me to read something written that way, but I really liked it. The lines felt like different ideas but it rhyme with each other and they all made a story that made sense. But after reading it I really wish you'd write a wholesome story about it :D |
LCPB-chan chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 Short and cute, just perfct, I really like it! The idea of writing a few scenes with a few sentence is nice and original. (By the way, I hope you have but, if you still haven't seen the movie I can send you a link, just ask.) |
blue-espeon chapter 1 . 7/8/2015 Your sentences are great and I enjoyed this a lot. Everyone seems in character, which is sadly a rare feat in this fandom. 33 and 45 made me chuckle, and I'm glad not all of the sentences were angst, even though this ship is ripe with it. Lovely work! |
mitski-r chapter 1 . 6/9/2015 Hey there ! As soon as I finished reading your fic I couldn't help but fav it.I never thought that drabbles could convey such feelings ; some parts were really heart-warming,some parts were bittersweet and I laughed at other parts.I think that you did a great job by expressing shinkane's relationship with few made me think "that's so akane like" or "that's so kougami like".I really liked your work. |
solka chapter 1 . 5/10/2015 the fic is nice, sometimes sad, sometimes quite hilarious. The first one pushed me into reading the rest of it - it conveyed a rather strong picture in very few words - bravo for that :) -s. |
MandNwriterzz chapter 1 . 4/18/2015 This is beautiful. It's perfect really, the gentle interactions and the teasing and the agreeing... Love it all! -M |
Silvern Shine chapter 1 . 3/19/2015 Hi! Last time I read your story I just favorited (whoops!) so here I am today. In few words, I loved it. I usually don't like drabbles or one sentence fics based on different prompts because I don't think most writers can convey the feelings of an entire series using only a few words. I have to say though that in this case I was completely wrong. I fell in love with Psycho-Pass and the close and strange relationship between Kougami and Tsunemori so I was utterly disappointed at finding there was no Kougami in the second season (though my inner fangirl fainted from emotion during the few imaginary moments!). In a single sentence you managed to capture those feelings, the frustation and longing (and in some of them a necessary happy ending) I'd have liked to see in the anime. I have no advice or constructive criticism for you, because simply I don't see anything to improve in your story (if not that I'd have liked more!) I apologize for any grammar mistakes, English isn't my first language. I hope to read more of your stories soon! |
ChiFuji chapter 1 . 2/25/2015 wow, you really did an amazing job, I'm speachless, you could acclimate well the serie and gave more feelings to the characters. You sure did an excelent job writing it in separated paragraphs, is the first time I see it. Congratulatios! |
pocari chapter 1 . 2/22/2015 this is an extremely captivating and alluring story! you're a very talented and i felt chills while reading this! can't wait to read more from you ) |
SaKuRiMo0n chapter 1 . 2/18/2015 Ok, try to push myself in this commentary. First dire that English is not my native language, so I apologize if you had not understand something. Still missing me to speak properly. I must say that I had fun a bit, and I found it very easy to read as it is divided by fairly short paragraphs. I like that a lot. I think as far as I was concerned, tried to be very true to the personalities of the characters, and that's something that a lot appreciated. At least, I appreciate it a lot. Well, I think that I have nothing more to say. We read, greetings! |
TheRedSin chapter 1 . 2/15/2015 Criticism? I can't think of one. You're very talented. All the themes you wrote are beautiful. It's great. XD |
i love blobfish chapter 1 . 2/9/2015 this is beautiful, and i especially love how you managed to simultaneously weave in other characters. kudos to you :-) |
randomcat23 chapter 1 . 2/8/2015 Loved this! 03-Ha, dang it. I had plot bunnies in my head about Akane empting out Ko's courters. Really liked this bit. 10-Made me grin like an idiot. 20-Ugh, heartbreaking, but one of my favorites. 35-Perfect. Really good scene. All were great. I really liked how you worked in the rest of the cast too. Thanks for the read! |