(and my computer went crazy and posted before I finished writing, sorry bout that)
As I was saying...
The story has unusual settings, but it worked out so very well! Love how they are both in character, despite the fact that they are not even close to the brotherly roles from the original. It shows off your writing skills. Great job!
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Unusualm but strangely very fitting! Very nice idea and gj on keeping them IC, despite

Damn love this

Wonderful Story Would Think twice About Jacking Off During That Story

I really like it a lot! **

HAWT~! ;)

You should continue this, it's good.

This whole story is a heart attack for Hidashi shippers, and I love it! There's just something really sexy about Hiro as a teacher and Tadashi as a student; I would say most definitely write a sequel to this story because it's fucking amazing, and then maybe try one where their positions are reversed, where Tadashi is the teacher (still top, of course) and Hiro the student (still bottom because we all know it's where he belongs). Anyway I really like this story and will most likely reread it a zillion times :)

I loved ot I always read yaoi if you read or saw the maze runner you should do a minhoxnewt or thomasxnewt or thomasxminho

I love your style. Loved this story.

Wait, woah, wait a second. I realize this is solely smut but Hiro has an apartment, by himself? He's still technically a minor isn't he!? Where are his parents? Where are Tadashi's parents? And what kind of image is "a tidal wave of fire" supposed to evoke in the reader? Just some questions I have, it's not exactly imperative I receive an answer. This was sexy/adorable and I guess that's all that matters. 4.25/5 Nice job.

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OMG THAT WAS AMZING PLZ WRITE MORE!

Next chapter plz. U hav really conveyed their characters I need more

jaja, eso fue lindo, no me lo espraba!

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