Noooo this is so sad and emotional! Why!?

You couldn't see, but I was clapping at the end of the story. It was incredible, so well written! It hurt me to think that Hermione caused the disease. At first I thought the girls were going to be steril, a plan of Voldemort against muggleborns (I'm crazy, sorry hahaha) But Hermione causing everything is much more plausible. She was the only muggleborn healthy. And something so strange as a time traveler would bring consequences to that era. I loved how everything fits, how James and Lily were brought together because of Hermione. It's sad and beautiful at the same time.

This seemed like fun but why r the tenses all wrong. Kinda throws the whole thing off. Sort of annoying. It's like reading a script

This was absolutely amazing. Heartbreaking. But amazing none the less!

This is one of the most well done, bittersweet yet heartbreaking story on James and Hermione I've ever read and it was a GLORIOUS EXPERIENCE. Your writing is superb and you broke my heart but it was beautiful. I love it! Can you write more of this rare pair? But with a happy ending? haha

Great job and thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us!

Wonderful story. I absolutely loved it

there is something tragic about time travelling, if it happens to sustain the timeline... like they can't make their own decisions, even though it feels like it. loved the story - some more james/hermione with happy ending? pretty please? :)

I am not crying. I'm just reading this in the rain

super awesome..

yes, quite sad.. but really good

I so love a James/Hermione story! devestated thats they didn't end up together but it was so well done 3

Absolutely LOVE this story!:') She's back home, but nothing changed:(

I’ve read this more than once and even knowing how it ends still leaves me heartbroken and yearning for a different ending for their love but you do it so beautifully that when I finally stop crying it’s okay because I love the way you write and that you can bring out these emotions and feelings in me. You’re phenomenal, thank you.

Oh gosh, this ending! Heart-wrenching!

awesome

This was so amazing! I wasn't sure how you were going to tie it together, but you did spectacularly. I loved the characters and story line. I am also so impressed with how you weaved this into canon. Still I'm not going to lie, I cried in the last chapter. I desperately wanted her to see James again. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing story and your incredible talent!