I am glad you are continuing chocobo summoner. They are definitely my favorite mount and always wondered if someone would use them as a summoning. Are you considering switching teams like Naruto Shikamaru, and Choji I could see being a good team?

awesome first two chapters but couldn't you have put this after a chapter

I think you should do team 9 or 10. I think in these kind of stories their underused. I would like to see how they would react when they see his summons. I don't want team 7 cause it's going be too alike in canon and team 8 cause it just used for naruhina which a pairing that gets boring seeing it countless times.

Keep going pleas this story is awesome pleas I love your story

Nice story so far wonder how the future chapters will turn out anyways keep up the great work!

Interesting setup so far. You should at least add a couple more chapters to give an idea where you're going with it.
Some grammar and formatting problems - particularly in the prologue, but that's why you get a proofreader for such things.

cool the chocobo squad is good and they already have amazing teamwork. naruto is actually competent and getting the training he should have had. though the worlds being connected sounds interesting and would be cool if naruto travelled there at one poinit.

I don't mind this at all because you are using the characters out of my favorite Final Fantasy series, and it is great to see this again.

I don't mind the chocobos but in the world of Ninjas of Naruto it won't work well with the fearsome Summons that some of the characters in this series because the Toads and the Snakes are superior, and remember Naruto has Kurama inside of him, and if he wants to fight the enemies that are chasing him he will need the power of Kurama but unfortunately the summons of the Toads has the key to control Kurama.

I have nothing personal against Chocobos but against the Snakes and Salamander Summons they are nothing but a waste, and the Toads give Naruto a incredible power that these birds don't give, and that is the ability to use the Sage Arts or have the power of Senjutsu unless Naruto is granted the ability to use magic like in Final Fantasy.

nice job with this.

that was great teamwork. Put him on team 8

;_; lucky... I totally would like to have a Chocobo.

He'll yeah.
Great chapter, update soon.

awesome I love chocobos. if you do a pairing would be cool if you paired naruto with a final fantasy girl like lightning or something. maybe inuzuka hana since they both care for animals in a sense? do the chocobos have a special ability to teach like sage mode? maybe their sage mode makes naruto really fast like a chocobo.

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