Are these chapters out of order or something? Like seriously wtf

so Naruto still fears ghosts, even after becoming a God...

I really enjoy this story, I saw lots of updates but never read it

Has the best of god naruto while also having the Ultear and Naruto interactions as well as lots of deviations from the classic story while staying true to FT spirit

I'm actually very excited for Tenrou arc, though I wonder if Naruto will let Natsu still get the Tower of Heaven and battle against Oracion Seis which were good forcing functions of growth for the team

Ive read this like 5 times and its still just as good

I really like this story, and all your other ones, just wish you’d write the war and what happens with the council and the academy

I know this is a story written by someone who probably doesn't speak English as a first language, but damn if this writing isn't clunky as shit and super awkward. There's so many errors, and the dialogue is super stiff and often makes no sense.

La historia en si es realmente genial, es un buen material para desarrollar , sin embargo la narrativa simplemente no me atrapó, desde el capítulo 3 ya me perdiste y no hubiera seguido leyendo si no fuera por el echó de que la idea de la historia es buena , pero aun asi la narrativa simplemente no funciona al menos para mi

You are a great author and I am lucky to be graced with your presence.

Not really a fan of harems or the way your portraying naruto because of your edgelord fetish

I was kinda hoping for Ultear to die. I mean Naruto gave her so many chances

You say that he wants to live a normal life but here he is getting involved with Zeref instead of laying low as he wanted too. What kind of hypocrisy is that? You cant even have your own Naruto be consistent. At least this time Naruto is actually Naruto whereas most of your stories you can just replace him with an OC and wouldn't even change a thing. I still don't understand why you gave him the ability to use magic when he can just use Chakra and going off the way you described his power; chakra will be more beneficial for him to use but no just give him magic for no reason other than being "cool" and making this Naruto more of an OC. I can't bother to read this, I'm just done with you as a whole. I'm constantly disappointed with your stories and the ending are just incredibly disappointing a well

Really good story, while some of Narutos action later in the story are a little confusing as how you portrayed him earlier in the story. It’s still good, I am looking forward to the next chapter and on how this story ends.

the theory is still very cool

Dude wtf how can this be stopped here the pain ughhh let me slap you

He is just playing around with her