This is beautiful.

I just want them to be happy and in one piece too.

For some odd reason, I've been more hysterically in denial of Ace's death these few weeks. Have no idea why.

There's never too much saving Thatch and Ace aus!

I want more of this. Like how Thatch deals with his power and stuff like that.

Oh, this is sad. Happy too 'cause, yay Thatch! He isn't dead! But sad because, he had to kill a man that he thought of as his brother for a long time AND had just tried to kill him. This is really good, I like this a lot. Thanks for sharing your writing!

*Is finally reading and reviewing after a million years even though it's only been out like a week* :'D I'm doing it by section again cuz it's easier.

So yeah, I'm scared for Thatch already .-.

Ah, the calm before the storm. I laughed when Ace started singing to 'Beat It' XD You know there is a parody of the song from Weird Al Yankovic (probably spelled his name wrong) called 'Eat It'? XD I really like how you described Thatch thinking about what to do with the fruit.

I know this was not meant to be a funny scene but I just pictured Teach going into Thatch's room rifling through everything and making a mess and tossing things everywhere XD

*Was terrified cuz I thought you killed Thatch but continues reading* Thank You for letting him live! *Sobs* AH, YOU LET HIM EAT THE FRUIT FGJNHDFLKUHSFHSD! XD XD Question: How and when? I'd really like to know and I'd also like to know if you're adding then more cuz...

I did the same thing in a story of mine but it has two chapters and I'm currently working on chapter three. (Trust me, I don't think there are a lot of stories with Thatch getting the Yami-Yami no Mi out there)

Anyway, I really liked this. Really, I did. It was nice reading this kind of story through another authors p.o.v. I do feel like a few things were missing but Idk what exactly *Shrugs* Overall, great story, good descriptions, I liked how the characters reacted throughout the story and the way you introduced Thatch into having the Yami power was good in my opinion. It was a serious moment and sad and- it just felt right, o.k? *Flees* Oh and there's something I noticed but I'm not sure if it was intended to be that way if so, I found it and if not then forget it, lol.

Sequel? Please? *sparkly puppy eyes*

Uwaaaa Awesome! I like the ending that you didnt killed Thatch and let him eat the fruit!

I love this! Now I wish this actually happened! Thank you so much for writing this! It was amazing