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keep up the good work man hope to hear the rest of it:)

In your story are any of them into music and can that be a chapter?

oi, dodn't stop writting u have a nick for it. i'll wait for u to finish up the next chapter

Have you played the new Smash Bros for the Wii U yet? If so have you played as Pac Man and Ryu yet? Have you ever played the Mortal Kombat games? Also pranking a sadist like Akeno is never a good idea even if her response is good or bad. Koneko in this story is awesome (has Kuroka been introduced in the story yet?) and I wonder if she is a fan of MMA (cause of her gloves in the show) in your story? The show underutilized a lot of characters that are much more than just being a member of Issei's harem (glad he chose Rias in this story to end the harem) and it will be fun to see that.

Love this. please post more and maybe a Kiba POV I guess.

i like it more please

Haha, the way you write koneko is the best in a comedic way, I would like to see more chapters in her POV, nice job with the fic

Koneko's POV would be awesome to read, and I have an idea for a chapter involving Koneko and Hiyoto betting on who wins while watching UFC (if you watch UFC that is, and if so who are your favorite fighters?) or playing the UFC video game to show another side of Koneko's character, cause in the show she is a gamer.

This was great. I hope you post more :D

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I read the entire story so far, and it is interesting to see how the ORC still cares about Hiyoto and I don't know if a trade is possible but is is unlikely cause Rias would not trade in her peerage cause she looks at them as family (see Diodora). What about a way to do so to trade him back is for her to give up her Rook piece to get Hiyoto back unless you still want Rossweisse to be in the story as Rias' rook. Tecnically isn't Hiyoto still Rias' rook since she gave her Rook piece to him. I do like the Akeno and Hiyoto relationship that is developing in the story so far. I was wondering if they can do a chapter about them singing rock songs in a Karaoke bar on a new double date with them and Issei and Rias? Also do you watch UFC cause it does sound like the character might be into MMA with his training? Also isn't Kiba gonna ask about the other persons sword birth ability since it came from the Holy Sword Project he was a part of and how did she survive like he did.

The sword is a asculon not Albion