Reviews for Recoil
Lowell chapter 1 . 4/19/2018
Very good.
fairytaleweaver chapter 1 . 6/25/2015
That was amazing.
GryphonFledgling chapter 1 . 5/11/2015
This hurt. This hurt so badly. In the best possible way. The bit where Yuri hesitates to even touch Estelle... No seriously, what gave you the right to do that to my heart?

This was beautiful. Just... Ugh. I'm speechless in the wake of the emotions this brought on. The dialogue was particularly perfect, especially in the way it captured their during-battle banter.

Stunning. Just stunning.
feathered moon wings chapter 1 . 2/28/2015
I liked this, I really really did. It good to see this kind of stuff because lets face it, one doesn't jump back up from a trauma that easily, there ARE consequences that come out of this situations.
I think what I liked the best was that Yuri let himself be stabbed, that he stopped as you way... I don't know. ANYWHO it was awesome :) Thumbs up.
therm chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
You're still writing Vesperia! I haven't played the game in years, but I remembered your fanfics and came back to see if you were still active. I'm really glad a talented writer like you decided to flesh Estelle out. I feel like that part of the game was just skipped over, like Estelle just rejoined the party and everything was forgotten. For the supposed female lead the story doesn't treat her as respectfully as it should. They have so much room to expand her character but choose not to. Good job, once again!
Misty Reeyus chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
(They're all very welcome /coughs. But all that aside...)
Ohhhh man, I didn't even have an exact scenario in mind myself when I made that AU/what-if audio clip but uNF I absolutely love what you've done with it. Estelle when she lost it was so heartbreaking yet so in character despite everything, and Yuri's reaction to it was so perfect because it's for Estelle, it's always been for Estelle, he's never going to hurt her and I want to scream. Overall party-family interactions were just perfect as always (Raven and Yuri was ouch, Karol and Rita were perfect sweethearts, Judy's line to Duke was /amazing/), and just the whole direction you took with this idea was wonderful. Not gonna lie, I was honestly expecting this to be more of a "BAD END, they actually went through and killed Estelle" sort of thing, but I love it this way too, because it shows how no matter how badly Estelle falls apart, they'll just pick her pieces back up anyway. It's an absolutely awful scenario (which I will take full responsibility for) and it makes it so much harder to heal, but it's a beautiful alternate take on events and while I'm 12938400% wrecked, I'm also really super glad I helped inspire it.
God, Legi, you're spectacular.
Darwise chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
Really really enjoyed this one. Those last couple of paragraphs are what really make this story for me; You've got a good knack for narrative and getting into characters' heads. Been reading your stories for a while, and it's really is your strongest point.

Also, "No one stops"? I see what you did there, and I like it.
burningmetal chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
I love your writing. The characters come alive in your stories, and you get their voices so right! I am always happy to see an update notice. I hope that one day you'll try your hand at the Tales of Xillia universe. I would love to see your take on the characters in that game.