Wow, jon was going to leave her since she couldn't have a child? She didnot lie yet he was upset enough to actually leave her... but stayed bc it was fixed...that is so wrong. Idk if you're young or dont understand about love but if you truly love someone, he would not have done what jon did...so wrong...i really enjoyed parts of your fic but i feel like with jon's actions, i just dont believe he truly loves her and the wat dany begged him was too pathetic...good luck with this story, im done here...i dont believe in the 2 of them in this story..

The whole idea with stannis taking the throne and putting dany in the dungeon was sloppy. There are many questions for this chapter...why didnt the red woman see stannis acts in the flames, how could stannis overthrow danys large army and dragons, impossible...how can stannis claim the throne then claim trial by combat when he wasnt the king? With dany being a dragon and mother of dragon, how can she not control her dragons? Theres so much, it's just a silly chapter with stannis having the upper hand, again impossible... i would rather you have stannis' attempt foiled almost immediately rather than going through all that foolishness...

don't like how drogo is included in this, i think dany loves jon more To be honest

Could you continue

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That was great. Happy with ending

Kinda confused. Why would the nights watch go into a southern war for the throne? They are a separate entity. And Jon is a warg too. Wouldn't he have been showing those traits around the dragons as well? Jon has always cared too mich about his honor and the vows he made to the nights watch. This version of him doesn't really show any struggle with his obvious choices to completely ignore his vows

Can't wait for more soon.

nice chapter

It's finaly over..."Insert fireworks and celebrations here"

nice chapter'

So easily he breaks his vows.

Nice chapter

Hmmm. I've been saying to my hubby since season one that this saga would end by Daenerys combining forces with Jon Snow, because they are by far the most decent, yet at the same time canny, characters in this universe. So I'll be interested to see what you do with this very premise.

da fuck is this garbage drogo was barely a character their whole relationship was stockholm syndrome if there is a heaven in asoiaf i guarantee drogo is not garbage horselord is dead get over it no personality having ass.