What does this only have four reviews?! This is amazing!

The way you described this story really brought out the details and made it feel more alive. I ship Olicity so hard! This story is perfection! It's perfectly in-character! Many people don't have a full grasp on writing in-character, especially when it comes to shipping, but this-this is wonderful!

I love it!

Loved it!~M

Great job! I could see their second date going something like this. Really loved the ending!

I like it :)

awwwwww this was cute!