Loved! Omg, so it was V. Krane the entire time? Oooh, snap!

Amazingggg. Poor Leo!

The two versions are certainly quite different. Both are good, though, so great job. :]

Omg,... How could they, look like if it wasn't for Leo they would still be in a basement lmaooo. But I can't wait for the update :) 3

Interesting. Very entertaining. And of course Leo has the hardest time. Is it wrong for me to want to see an episode of Lab Rats that has Leo sadness?
Because they really need it. Leo has proven himself, but he has more to prove because of who he is.
Loved the story.

Awesome story! Did not expect Krane and S-1 hope you continue

great story is it just going to be a one shot or a multi-shot

?! Are you going to continue that?! That wasn't nice. :(

Gorgeous, Shaine. I wish would let me cut and paste, so I could point out the passages I really loved. Like Adam and Bree preventing Leo from checking on Chase. And Leo feeling like he doesn't need to prove anything to anyone anymore- throughout the series, he has wanted to be more, and to do more. So him not wanting to be bionic anymore kind of makes it feel like he's come full-circle. And of course, Douglas...no one writes Douglas as well as you do. :)

You are a great writer
I hope you continue this story

I don't know whether to laugh or scream or cry right now. WHAT THE HECK?! That was beautiful/infuriating/terrifying. Krane? And S-1? GAH! Well, that was a twist. I LOVE when author's do plot twists that make my head spin. It means you're doing something right. ;) Is there going to be a part two or something? 'Cause that's got way too many loose ends to just leave it, right? Well, whatever you do, I enjoyed this story (original and alternate) immensely. Again, thank you for such a wonderful read! I liked it a lot. :)

Well this one feels like it will spin off into another long story like search and destroy...And I won't be sad to see it. See you soon.

That was cool! Are you going to continue the alternate version because it would be cool to see how the others react and get Leo back. I love the story :)

Ohmygod I did NOT see that coming! What an amazing twist! I love it! I love it! I absolutely love how Krane and S-1 steal Leo! And how Leo opened up - AND ALL THAT DEEP STUFF - my gosh great writing! Please update soon! Or write a sequel as my request for being the 500th reviewer? Please?

This was amazing. I did not expect that ending at all. It was great. So beautifully written, and so interesting. You have a talent for sucking in the audience. Such a great story, and you are such a great writer. Thank you for writing such an amazing story!