Musume is the japanese word for girl, not daughter

Lmao you nerfing naruto Lololololololololol

Really good hope you update soon

Grammar is absolutely atrocious along with Naruto's personality and power.

Well, that was interesting and explains things

Well, that was certainly interesting I guess all 3 stories I'm reading the first parts are all the same as for Sasgay no way to I want that retard in this story he should DIE

Well, this was a nice start

i think i have read really similar fanfic published in 2009, please if you have taken idea from there please give credit to the writer, and if NOT then you are great, thanks for the chapter

Liking this so far

Why this Naruto is so weak? He seems even weaker than a simple jounin.

Naruto is acting like a little bitch not trusting moka enough with how he got here , seriously she was his friend seriously , probably more than his "friends" in Konoha.I hope he Hinata in the harem that's good there's too many fics with her as a pairing.

Damnit Everytime I read "Learn Your Place" I always hear Hinata's voice in my has the same Va as Hinata

please update soon

It was a good chapter with a nice little teaser of what’s to come. Also, does that mean, Naruto and Moka did the dirty, or just some petting and would continue the act fully later?

This story is worse than cancer.