Cool cool story, was hoping for more. :)

hope to read more some day

You know, rereading this, I've come to the conclusion that you wasted a *lot* of time getting to the point.

Great story please continue

Good story so far.

I do feel you have brought in certain element in to early and have drag the conflict a bit long as we are sort of at the beginning however it is very well written.

Im not 100% sure how i feel about the history/backstory/reason why and how harry is here but it kind of works.

I hope you come back to this story

Are you ever gonna come back? :(

I really enjoyed this story, please continue

Can you explain your use of the word flanging? Because despite googling it I don’t understand how it’s supposed to work here. I consider myself a well read individual and I’ve never seen it used in this way.

I do really really like this story especially that last chapter. To me the info dumos are better then the action. Course that xould be the hisyory nerd in me. I hope you come back and havent died or something.

I really like the quirky turian it was different. I really like your story too. I hope you come back.

Oh mightiest of all fishes. Do not abandon this story for it is verily the best Mass Effect crossover i have ever read.

dear god this is boring at this rate you prob end up with 10mil for the whole triology

First, I'm hoping you'll continue the story, it is excellent.

Second, a theory about the end of the chapter, Harry can somehow transfer Custodian abilities, and saved it from the one he killed in the past. That's my theory on how he might give her the abilities.

more or rewrite plz

I wonder how Harry will fair fighting against Reaper tech and husks?