| Reviews for Not So Black and White |
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   crity2re chapter 39 . 8/9/2018 Well... damn. I thought I set my filters for completed stories when I started this, but what a shock tonight! I was so immersed that I didn't realize that I was running out of chapters. If you ever come back to this, even just to say how you see it ending without writing it the details, I'd be very grateful to know how you planned on ending this story. |
| Silver1226 chapter 39 . 4/7/2018 Woo, I finally caught up. And I am greatly looking forward to seeing what comes next |
| Alli chapter 15 . 1/10/2018 You must get a beta reader. Immediately. Why? They may be able to correct your grammar as I’m guessing English isn’t your first language. And you can storytell well. You write so smoothly and your flow is great. Your sentence structure could use a change but it’s mostly a small matter in correcting grammatical errors. Otherwise, you’re doing a pretty good job with Ms. Rowling’s world. Keep writing and you’ll get better. |
| dethwatch chapter 39 . 12/31/2017 Can't find the words to say how truly amazing this story is i hope you are able to update really soon |
| muggle2012 chapter 39 . 8/1/2017 I've been enjoying your story a great deal. I think that I've read it once before though. When would you be updating? Just so I don't have to re read I again. |
| elizabethrose1974 chapter 1 . 7/8/2017 please keep going! |
| Timelady92 chapter 39 . 5/18/2017 Hey there! Just as promised, a review for you ;) I have to say, I absolutely love your story. It's completely different from all the Snamione stories I've read so far and I really enjoy that it also includes elements of Marriage Law. The character development is also really nicely and convincingly done. I also like the whole Charlie thing and that Harry is dating Luna. Oh, and I must say, there were much fewer typos in the last few chapters, which made it even better for me :) Probably because you got a decent laptop again. If you should ever need someone to proofread a chapter, just tell me. Four eyes are better than two ;) Thank you for providing me hours of entertainment. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Cheers, tl |
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 39 . 5/15/2017 Good chapter, Happy Mother's Day! |
| RhodaBush chapter 39 . 5/15/2017 More please |
| SereniteRose chapter 39 . 5/15/2017 this is great story and an awesome plot, I love it, I like the flashbacks, thanks ever so much, I can't wait till thenext chapter as this chapter was wonderful. |
| laumirot chapter 38 . 5/13/2017 Please update is a good story. |
| SereniteRose chapter 38 . 4/1/2017 I wonder what her dream is about, anyway another lovely chapter, thanks ever so much. |
| RhodaBush chapter 38 . 4/1/2017 More please |
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 38 . 3/31/2017 More, keep it coming. |
| Claude Amelia Song chapter 36 . 3/28/2017 Oh Lily, this is so sweet. And you made him feel real too. I love it. One day this year I will review it properly. Are you going to give them a happy ending? Please say yes... |
