Hi! I understand that this was written 5 years ago, when the full series wasn't released yet for Fairy Tail, but I have to say- WHAT WERE YOU THINKING? No hate, but how can LUCY summon 4 CELESTIAL SPIRITS? That's nearly IMPOSSIBLE. Even near the end of the second season, she can barely summon 3 at the same time? And she learned this in five months? Even with training nonstop, I really doubt they can do that. She may have managed to summon most- if not all of them during the Loke arc, but they weren't doing anything, and she literally collapsed right after that. Where this story takes place, after the Edolas arc, there's no way for her to train so hard to the point where she can summon four celestial spirits AND have them hold back Natsu. IN FIVE MONTHS TOO! Natsu purely trained for a year, yet he still struggles against Gray. Another thing, no offense to the Lucy lovers, but there's no way she can beat Natsu, Gray, and Erza. If anything, Lucy and Wendy are the WEAKEST of Team Natsu. Lucy was only maybe- a few months into the guild by the Edolas arc, not including Tenroujima. (Lucy joined Fairy Tail in X784, Edolas Arc also was in X784.) Continuing, there's literally no way Yuki could beat Natsu. Faster? Maybe, but he has NO magic in the least, maybe except for his curse. How is Lucy getting these 'celestial shields'? Levy and Freed could NEVER. Sending a spell through a letter? What? I'm utterly appalled. Character development isn't a thing in this story, apparently. The storyline is okay, I'll give you that, but why would Natsu and the others ignore Lucy? It's not like Lucy was a replacement for Lisanna, and Lucy doesn't hate her either. So how come? Natsu, Ezra, Gray, and Happy are not people who are like that. I consider this to be out of character. Their MOST important phrase is about comrades, there WOULD be no point to leave behind Lucy and the others who were involved. You don't forget like 6-7 people just because one other person came back. With Fruits Basket, most characters are like their ones in the OGs, though I'm kind of concerned for OHSHC. They're barely being involved in any of the plot, other than Tamaki and a select few. I'm definitely not liking the Fairy Tail characters right now, Lucy is a kind person. I'm not exactly sure why she's acting so cold to everyone. Being sinister and scary isn't part of her character, it sounds something Erza or Mira would do instead. I'm interested in this story but so far, there's way too many errors to point out. 8/5/2020. TL;DR: Lucy can't have that much power in 5 months or less, and everyone from Fairy Tail is out of character.

Please Update more soon..

I wonder if Juvia will curl in on herself as well? Perhaps rain clouds above her and she leaves the guild, too.

I wonder if Lucy will put away pr continue her novel...? I feel so bad for Gajeel as well! Levy and Gajeel were so cute! I hope the nakama bond forms again

Yuki x Lucy? :,(

I'm glad you were able to update this story. I enjoyed this story very much! Can't wait for the next one!

Please make it so that Lucy will end up with Yuki...I just ship them so much and can't bear the thought of her being with someone else... please...

I still don’t understand how stupid everyone is. The second Aya showed up, I knew it was Lucy. And I’m HORRIBLE at solving mysteries. I also still don’t get why Akito wants to keep Lucy away. It’s confusing. But still a great chapter...I guess. I’m pretty sure the Celestial Spirits would be able to come out on their own as well...at least some of them.

Great chapter, Can't wait for the next one!

Slow going but hope to read more developments!

Now I know what other people feel like. It’s pretty frustrating to wait. Last week I gave up on this story but when I was looking through some crossovers I saw this and I looked at the chapters and I was like ‘YES! Another update!’

Great chapter can’t wait for the next one!

Dude please keep writhing. I want it know what happens. PLEASE

Please oh please keep writing! I absolutely HATE cliffhangers. Also this is a really good story. And I’m still debating whether or not I’m gonna add this to my reread group. If I love a fic enough I will reread it.

OMG. I can’t believe ur still weighting this. Usally people stop 3-5 years ago. Or at least A year ago so glad ur still going

Nooooooooo what no no nooo no no! She’s dead?!