fucking shit don't read

hahhah indra fight asura returned in this fanfic but its naruto vs sasuke

7 Women? CAP

Please update.. indra/sasuke must kill orochimaru and take over his henchmen... then naruto/ashura must battle indra to the death

so he can keep up with ero-sennin but is being beaten in speed by neji

I hate wasting a review like this but...has this story been abandoned? The idea behind it is awesome, plain and simple. I mean, it sounded like you had everything pretty much planned out, but it's been almost 2 years. Yeah, I'm whining.

Hell, I've read all of your fics, minus the one piece crossover since I'd be completely lost. And they're topnotch. So, I'm kinda salivating waiting for an update, or the dreaded "this fic has been abandoned"; something, you know.

In any case, I don't see Indra walking away from a battle with Hiruzen unscathed. The old man would instantly know that he's not fighting Sasuke. That, and he'd notice Naruto's desperation to intercept "Sasuke" and not misinterpret it as a simply rivalry. He'd quickly know he was dealing with a shinobi more dangerous than any he's previously faced and act accordingly.

Naruto is at a disadvantage, too. Asura and himself merged, but he has to relearn everything. Indra, on the other hand, simply destroyed Sasuke's soul, allowing him free reign, only having to retrain his body, compared to what Naruto has to go through.

While it's be easier to just have Hiruzen kill Indra using the Shinigami Seal, for some reason, I don't see you going that route. It'd be too simple, even with an epic battle.

Anywho, I'll continue to wait for an update. Hope your comic series got off the ground also. Later.

Its been 2 years! Where TF are you?!

Dead?

I kinda liked where this was going till you brought out Indra so soon into the story. The story itself was very well written much better then some people with English as their first language have done that I've read.

I stopped read after chap 4 but good luck trying to give power ups to make them stand a chance

INDRA! Hell YES!

It is so unfair for Ashura/Naruto to fight in the chuunin exams, you know. What could some poor gennins, despite most being above gennin level, could possibly do against someone with Power close enough to Rikudou's, hmm?

In other words ,i will greatly enjoy reading Naruto wipe everybody's asses! And this is such a f*****g GREAT Idea!

I'd be better if it wasn't for you Kishimoto loving fuckfaces.

I was sorely disappointed with naruto' fight and the fact that you nerfed him to bring him down to neji's level but I have been enjoying this fic keep up the good work.

okay now you had put Indra in sasuke. I'm out. I won't even consider to read further. bye fucker.