Hi, this is late.
If any case u finish this story

Can't wait for the next chapter, I will be paitlently waiting. G-rev is my favorite season so I know I will enjoy this part even more, even if you change some thing.

Haven't read this in months, I have to read again the whole story, and I'm glad I did that, becuase now I remebember how much I like this story. The chapter was really greatand I can't sstop felling sorry for Kai, poor kid

You write Kai's point of view so much stronger then tysons :) but I loved them both.

I cannot wait to see what happens next! I love how you described tysons family mess too, felt so accurate and realistic.

Great stuff.

Excited for how your version of S3 plays out. Especially how the characters will be interacting durign the tournament.
I look forward to future chapters :)

Ok, first of all...poor tyson. Poor kai...I just want to hug them

You completely have blended in this chapter with the series and answered a lot of unanswered questions. This is like the behind the scenes of beyblade the writers just didn't put in due to time issues or some such nonsense.

I love your research into this! I don't think the writers of the show did as much research as you did. Yay for an awesome tala!

Cannot wait for the next chapter of this amazing story!

Yay! A new chapter. This is the one story I'm still following and probably the only reason I come back here! You're doing a great job can't wait to read more!

I love how in this piece you portray Tyson as less innocent than Kai, its really sweet yet strange to me because I could imagine it the other way around, Kai kissing more people. But it flows so nicely, so I adore it!

The whole intimate discussion made my cheeks burn xD, but it was adorable and so realistic.

I can't wait for the G-Rev season, it will be so exciting!

Those things mentioned at the end of your comment have peaked my interest. Enjoyed the story so far, and I look forward to more when you are able to put it up here :)

Just stumbled across this story, and I'm so thrilled you're updating it again! I love the relationship you've created between Tyson and Kai. It's super frustrating, but so realistic at the same time. Kai isn't mentally capable of handling what Tyson wants and you do an amazing job of depicting that. I'm dreading the upcoming breakup of the team, but I can't wait to see how this all unravels. Thanks for the great read!

Wow...hella emotional chapter.

Congratulations- you moved me to tears.

Just everything...wow.

First of all, kai giving tyson the red Jean jacket is adorable.

Imagining kai with a face as red as a cherry is adorable... Grandpa is just amazing!

I'll patiently wait for the next chapter...but the future chapters sound amazing :)

Ooooh Kai's a little jealous? I love it! .

Great minds think alike...I actually have a chapter written that has the 'I never' game (so when you read it, please don't think I copied you *sweat drops*

Maxie having sex already? Awww...I can totally see it...that kinda explains why he just seems so much more mature in g-rev than v-force too...I was kinda thinking "did he get laid?" Myself. You wrote it...it's cannon now xD

I loved this chapter! Going to read then next one!

Did I ever tell you how much I love the way you write Kai? Slowly pushing himself away from Tyson. Trying to remember but not remember. Still feeling Black Dranzer's power. Emily driving him up the fucking wall. Just...I love it. You totally get into Kai Hiwatari's head and dissect him piece by piece.

Starting to wonder if there's going to be a love triangle here with Tala coming into the picture.

You have no idea how much I want the next chapter!

Congrats with graduating! No idea how you do school and be a mom to a little one so young and still have time to write a story this fantastic! 3

Yay a new chapter! I love it!

Graet chapter it was worth the wait. I'm feeling so bad for Kai :( the first part was really sad. I can't wait for the next one and congrats for your graduation.